The article looks good, just a few things need sorting before it's GA quality.
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
Generally pretty good. A couple of spelling errors I've noticed. "severly" (should be severely) in the Development section, "influencial" in the Reception section (should be influential.) In the Audio section, "who is credited is an employee of Sierra" (should be credited as an employee)
(ref 27abcd)This source is a blog. Correct me if I'm wrong, but it doesn't seem to be by somebody associated with the game or a professional blog and so it fails
WP:SPS. (ref 28)this source also appears to be self published. Is it reliable?
A few things that don't seem to match up with the sources here. (ref 2b) In the gameplay section
this source is used to source a claim about the game being divided up into chapters with loading causing the only significant pauses in the game. I can't find that in the source. (ref 16c) In the development section it says that the name is also referring to Newtons third law of motion and uses
this source after the claim, but the source doesn't mention this. (ref 24) Also in the development section it says "Opposing Force was later one of the first titles to debut on Valve Software's Steam content delivery system 2003",
the source only says it's available on Steam and doesn't mention the date.
The article looks good, just a few things need sorting before it's GA quality.
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
Generally pretty good. A couple of spelling errors I've noticed. "severly" (should be severely) in the Development section, "influencial" in the Reception section (should be influential.) In the Audio section, "who is credited is an employee of Sierra" (should be credited as an employee)
(ref 27abcd)This source is a blog. Correct me if I'm wrong, but it doesn't seem to be by somebody associated with the game or a professional blog and so it fails
WP:SPS. (ref 28)this source also appears to be self published. Is it reliable?
A few things that don't seem to match up with the sources here. (ref 2b) In the gameplay section
this source is used to source a claim about the game being divided up into chapters with loading causing the only significant pauses in the game. I can't find that in the source. (ref 16c) In the development section it says that the name is also referring to Newtons third law of motion and uses
this source after the claim, but the source doesn't mention this. (ref 24) Also in the development section it says "Opposing Force was later one of the first titles to debut on Valve Software's Steam content delivery system 2003",
the source only says it's available on Steam and doesn't mention the date.