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Ykraps (
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18:51, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
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Sturmvogel 66 (
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11:22, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
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I'll get to this shortly--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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11:22, 17 June 2024 (UTC)
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Image appropriately licensed
Too much detail in the lede. No need for the tonnage or the reason for the mutiny
Trimmed. --
Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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Tell the reader what type of ship each one is on first appearance
Done, I think. Let me know if I've missed any. --
Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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last years as a fifth rate, in the West Indies confusing, suggest "last years on active service in..."
Okay, done. I was suggesting her armament would have been reduced when she was converted to a hospital ship. --
Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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Might be worth mentioning that carronades were not calculated in ship's rating during that time.
Already mentioned in a footnote. --
Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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Edward Bowater should be linked as notable. A redlink is perfectly fine0
Done. --
Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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link lugger
Done. --
Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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After a ten-hour chase the French privateer was captured near St Aubin's Bay. She turned out to be the 10-gun Renard, from St Malo. combine these two sentences
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Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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Add a cite in the table of flag officers as I missed the one in the main body on my first readthrough--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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14:58, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
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Done. --
Ykraps (
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08:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
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