perhaps add in what type of ships/submarines various HMS's were? eg the destroyer HMS Ambuscade, especially important for redlinked vessels
Think that I've caught all of these.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 20:00, 12 January 2019 (UTC)reply
Holy Loch and Lerwick are duplinked, as are Gibraltar, Gulf of Genoa, Corsica, Algiers, GRT, Beirut, Aegean Sea, Monemvasia, Malta, Scapa Flow and ASDIC, some more than once
perhaps add convoy numbers she protected on the North Russia route if known?
Source doesn't specify. I can assume they were JW and RA 53 based one the timing, but that would be OR. L293D (
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✎) 02:05, 13 January 2019 (UTC)reply
suggest "attempted to attack a German tugboat while surfaced"
suggest "28 civilians and eight crew members aboard, of whom 12 and two survived"
Mixing digits and spelling out the numbers violates MOS, which says that you have to be consistent.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 02:27, 13 January 2019 (UTC)reply
for "Italian armistice" link Armistice of Cassibile
"which had been sunk while trying to escape" probably worth mentioning that Italian ships were ordered to British ports as part of the Armistice conditions and the Germans tried to stop them
Lenton states TA14 was a torpedo boat (I know the two are a bit interchangeable for the Germans, but TA stands for Torpedoboot Ausland), ex-Italian Turbine, redlink?
File:French submarine Sibylle.jpg the source link doesn't link to this pic or establish that Crown copyright applies
the NFUR for File:SPORTSMAN badge-1-.jpg is a bit marginal IMHO, I wouldn't expect it to survive Milhist ACR or FAC, but I'll let it slip through at GAN
I'm AGFing File:British S-class submarine schematic drawing.jpg that it is Admiralty work, but you might need to research that
We need to know when File:Petrella (French Line Archives).jpg was published to use that licence, it also needs a US PD tag
File:HMS Sportsman in 1948.jpg doesn't have anything at the link to confirm it was taken by the UK Government
Yup, all done. L293D (
☎ •
✎) 00:05, 16 January 2019 (UTC)reply
I won’t be able to get onto this for a couple of day, as I’m away from a computer.
Peacemaker67 (
click to talk to me) 00:32, 16 January 2019 (UTC)reply
Holding breath until turns blue!--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 18:23, 17 January 2019 (UTC)reply
Yes, well I try to be prompt... This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work!
Peacemaker67 (
click to talk to me) 07:37, 18 January 2019 (UTC)reply
perhaps add in what type of ships/submarines various HMS's were? eg the destroyer HMS Ambuscade, especially important for redlinked vessels
Think that I've caught all of these.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 20:00, 12 January 2019 (UTC)reply
Holy Loch and Lerwick are duplinked, as are Gibraltar, Gulf of Genoa, Corsica, Algiers, GRT, Beirut, Aegean Sea, Monemvasia, Malta, Scapa Flow and ASDIC, some more than once
perhaps add convoy numbers she protected on the North Russia route if known?
Source doesn't specify. I can assume they were JW and RA 53 based one the timing, but that would be OR. L293D (
☎ •
✎) 02:05, 13 January 2019 (UTC)reply
suggest "attempted to attack a German tugboat while surfaced"
suggest "28 civilians and eight crew members aboard, of whom 12 and two survived"
Mixing digits and spelling out the numbers violates MOS, which says that you have to be consistent.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 02:27, 13 January 2019 (UTC)reply
for "Italian armistice" link Armistice of Cassibile
"which had been sunk while trying to escape" probably worth mentioning that Italian ships were ordered to British ports as part of the Armistice conditions and the Germans tried to stop them
Lenton states TA14 was a torpedo boat (I know the two are a bit interchangeable for the Germans, but TA stands for Torpedoboot Ausland), ex-Italian Turbine, redlink?
File:French submarine Sibylle.jpg the source link doesn't link to this pic or establish that Crown copyright applies
the NFUR for File:SPORTSMAN badge-1-.jpg is a bit marginal IMHO, I wouldn't expect it to survive Milhist ACR or FAC, but I'll let it slip through at GAN
I'm AGFing File:British S-class submarine schematic drawing.jpg that it is Admiralty work, but you might need to research that
We need to know when File:Petrella (French Line Archives).jpg was published to use that licence, it also needs a US PD tag
File:HMS Sportsman in 1948.jpg doesn't have anything at the link to confirm it was taken by the UK Government
Yup, all done. L293D (
☎ •
✎) 00:05, 16 January 2019 (UTC)reply
I won’t be able to get onto this for a couple of day, as I’m away from a computer.
Peacemaker67 (
click to talk to me) 00:32, 16 January 2019 (UTC)reply
Holding breath until turns blue!--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk) 18:23, 17 January 2019 (UTC)reply
Yes, well I try to be prompt... This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Nice work!
Peacemaker67 (
click to talk to me) 07:37, 18 January 2019 (UTC)reply