she was transferred to the Dardanelles Campaign Rephrase as it's literally impossible
Done
Link commissioned, coastal artillery, mine, guard ship
All done
With attempts to tow her having failed, she was abandoned with most of her crew having been successfully evacuated, and eventually sank. Awkward, possibly split?
See how I reworded it
earlier class, the same high speed needs an "and" or something
Added
Change enlisted men to the British equivalent, "ratings"
Good catch
provide metric conversions in diameter for the various pounder guns
Done
main battery turrets sides surplus "s" in turrets?
Fixed
side-plate damage Do you mean hull?
Sure
Malta on 5 October 1905. She underwent a refit at Malta after her grounding, and a second refit there Suggest swapping the "there" at the sentence with the second Malta to avoid close conjunction syndrome
Works for me
Irresistible transferred to the Channel Fleet was transferred
Done
counter fire from Irresistible forced the Ottomans to check their fire, knocking out two guns in the process Awkward
she was transferred to the Dardanelles Campaign Rephrase as it's literally impossible
Done
Link commissioned, coastal artillery, mine, guard ship
All done
With attempts to tow her having failed, she was abandoned with most of her crew having been successfully evacuated, and eventually sank. Awkward, possibly split?
See how I reworded it
earlier class, the same high speed needs an "and" or something
Added
Change enlisted men to the British equivalent, "ratings"
Good catch
provide metric conversions in diameter for the various pounder guns
Done
main battery turrets sides surplus "s" in turrets?
Fixed
side-plate damage Do you mean hull?
Sure
Malta on 5 October 1905. She underwent a refit at Malta after her grounding, and a second refit there Suggest swapping the "there" at the sentence with the second Malta to avoid close conjunction syndrome
Works for me
Irresistible transferred to the Channel Fleet was transferred
Done
counter fire from Irresistible forced the Ottomans to check their fire, knocking out two guns in the process Awkward