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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk) 17:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
1. Exclusive of government-furnished equipment. Suggest - Excluding government-furnished equipment
2. Aside from a brief period assigned to the 20th Destroyer Flotilla. Suggest - Aside from a brief period were she was assigned to the 20th Destroyer Flotilla
3. withdrawal of the three survivors later that day. Are those the British destroyers that survived?
4. 28/29 March. Suggest - 28-29 March
5. Stukas. Suggest - A link, or German Junkers Ju 87 dive bombers
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate ( talk) 17:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
Nice work Strum. Passed. Thurgate ( talk) 00:29, 2 March 2011 (UTC)
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Battle of Cape Matapan on 28/29 March 1941 when her
searchlight illuminated an Italian
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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk) 17:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
1. Exclusive of government-furnished equipment. Suggest - Excluding government-furnished equipment
2. Aside from a brief period assigned to the 20th Destroyer Flotilla. Suggest - Aside from a brief period were she was assigned to the 20th Destroyer Flotilla
3. withdrawal of the three survivors later that day. Are those the British destroyers that survived?
4. 28/29 March. Suggest - 28-29 March
5. Stukas. Suggest - A link, or German Junkers Ju 87 dive bombers
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate ( talk) 17:18, 1 March 2011 (UTC)
Nice work Strum. Passed. Thurgate ( talk) 00:29, 2 March 2011 (UTC)