I don't believe that Jane's identifies its artists like Brassey's does, so I think that PD-1923 is better for
File:King-Edward-Class.png. Other images licensed appropriately.
Done
Needs a cite for her namesake, which I think is better handled wherever construction is dealt with. Just my opinion, though.
Added a citation
Too much detail on her construction in the lede. I'm rather fond of "built for the Royal Navy in the first decade of the 20th Century" and "Completed in 1906,..." Hard to believe that she was completed the same year as Dreadnought!
See how I rewrote it
Link Montenegro, reserve, Vice Admiral (with a hyphen!), Portland, cruiser, destroyer, ran aground, listed
All done except Montenegro - I think the MoS advises against linking countries
Fixed the conversions in the infobox, no need for four digits.
Thanks
Replaced the link in the infobox for her engines, too much detail for too general a link. Anytime you have to go over a single line in the infobox, think hard about whether that detail is necessary for what's supposed to be a summary of her specifications.
Good point
Abbreviate the conversion for the torpedo tubes in the infobox.
Done
Fix your conversion for 8-inch guns
Done
Is there any info on trial speeds?
Curiously, Burt only gives the average IHP, revs, and boiler pressure for Britannia's 8-hour trials, but no speed. I figure those three are the least relevant, so didn't bother including them.
Torpedo tubes were bow, stern, broadside?
Added
No forward bulkhead?
No, that was a change they made with the Londons - they dropped the forward bulkhead in favor (or I suppose in this case, favour) of extending the belt to the stem
Typo and 9.2 turrets had
Fixed
If you decide to eliminate the detailed construction data from the lede like I suggested, remember to add the links to all the construction terms in the service section
Done
Under a fleet reorganisation "As part of..."?
Works for me
I'd suggest extracting the ship's captains from the Navy Lists before going to ACR with this.
Yeah, but I've been out of town over the weekend - I've gotten partway through, but it's time to dash off again, so I'll finish up tomorrow morning.
Parsecboy (
talk)
18:46, 27 January 2019 (UTC)reply
I don't believe that Jane's identifies its artists like Brassey's does, so I think that PD-1923 is better for
File:King-Edward-Class.png. Other images licensed appropriately.
Done
Needs a cite for her namesake, which I think is better handled wherever construction is dealt with. Just my opinion, though.
Added a citation
Too much detail on her construction in the lede. I'm rather fond of "built for the Royal Navy in the first decade of the 20th Century" and "Completed in 1906,..." Hard to believe that she was completed the same year as Dreadnought!
See how I rewrote it
Link Montenegro, reserve, Vice Admiral (with a hyphen!), Portland, cruiser, destroyer, ran aground, listed
All done except Montenegro - I think the MoS advises against linking countries
Fixed the conversions in the infobox, no need for four digits.
Thanks
Replaced the link in the infobox for her engines, too much detail for too general a link. Anytime you have to go over a single line in the infobox, think hard about whether that detail is necessary for what's supposed to be a summary of her specifications.
Good point
Abbreviate the conversion for the torpedo tubes in the infobox.
Done
Fix your conversion for 8-inch guns
Done
Is there any info on trial speeds?
Curiously, Burt only gives the average IHP, revs, and boiler pressure for Britannia's 8-hour trials, but no speed. I figure those three are the least relevant, so didn't bother including them.
Torpedo tubes were bow, stern, broadside?
Added
No forward bulkhead?
No, that was a change they made with the Londons - they dropped the forward bulkhead in favor (or I suppose in this case, favour) of extending the belt to the stem
Typo and 9.2 turrets had
Fixed
If you decide to eliminate the detailed construction data from the lede like I suggested, remember to add the links to all the construction terms in the service section
Done
Under a fleet reorganisation "As part of..."?
Works for me
I'd suggest extracting the ship's captains from the Navy Lists before going to ACR with this.
Yeah, but I've been out of town over the weekend - I've gotten partway through, but it's time to dash off again, so I'll finish up tomorrow morning.
Parsecboy (
talk)
18:46, 27 January 2019 (UTC)reply