Final comment and more a stylistic thing than anything - if you broke the second paragraph of Construction and career into two, starting with "The following year" then you'd have three equal sized paragraphs.
Thanks for reviewing this so quickly. I do plan on taking as many South African ships as I can to GA, although too many are either starts or redlinks for me to challenge your total. So watch this space!--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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22:40, 5 November 2016 (UTC)reply
Final comment and more a stylistic thing than anything - if you broke the second paragraph of Construction and career into two, starting with "The following year" then you'd have three equal sized paragraphs.
Thanks for reviewing this so quickly. I do plan on taking as many South African ships as I can to GA, although too many are either starts or redlinks for me to challenge your total. So watch this space!--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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22:40, 5 November 2016 (UTC)reply