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I've recently been told by an on-board witness the the USN helicopter used in Korea was a substitute for the intended Westland build aircraft. The Westland aircraft had suffered from blade de-lamination, and was unfit for service. Is this an item that people think should be mentioned in the article? I can undoubtedly obtain more details if required. Number774 ( talk) 22:01, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
While undergoing the rewrite of this article, I trawled through the Australian War Memorial image archives, and found several images of use. They are listed below, with the relevant image number(s) indicated in brackets. I have not had an opportunity to download these and upload them to Commons yet...if anyone beats me to some or all of them, I will not complain. -- saberwyn 09:59, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
Quite an impressive expansion! A suggestion, though: consider balancing the verifiability benefits of having notes after every single sentence against readability. Right now, the article has a massive redundancy of notes, particularly when the same note is repeated in several consecutive sentences.
Peter Isotalo 22:02, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
There are some images from the State Library of Queensland in commons:Category:Sydney (ship) that need identification. See my comments at commons:Commons_talk:State_Library_of_Queensland/Subjects#Sydney_(Ship). John Vandenberg ( chat) 06:49, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
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Image:HMAS Sydney (SMH 290851).jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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I've recently been told by an on-board witness the the USN helicopter used in Korea was a substitute for the intended Westland build aircraft. The Westland aircraft had suffered from blade de-lamination, and was unfit for service. Is this an item that people think should be mentioned in the article? I can undoubtedly obtain more details if required. Number774 ( talk) 22:01, 31 August 2008 (UTC)
While undergoing the rewrite of this article, I trawled through the Australian War Memorial image archives, and found several images of use. They are listed below, with the relevant image number(s) indicated in brackets. I have not had an opportunity to download these and upload them to Commons yet...if anyone beats me to some or all of them, I will not complain. -- saberwyn 09:59, 17 August 2009 (UTC)
Quite an impressive expansion! A suggestion, though: consider balancing the verifiability benefits of having notes after every single sentence against readability. Right now, the article has a massive redundancy of notes, particularly when the same note is repeated in several consecutive sentences.
Peter Isotalo 22:02, 25 August 2009 (UTC)
There are some images from the State Library of Queensland in commons:Category:Sydney (ship) that need identification. See my comments at commons:Commons_talk:State_Library_of_Queensland/Subjects#Sydney_(Ship). John Vandenberg ( chat) 06:49, 29 December 2010 (UTC)
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