"The film was partially inspired by William Shakespeare's comedy The Taming of the Shrew and is the official remake of B. Vittalacharya's Kannada film Mane Thumbida Hennu (1958), and the first remake by Vijaya Vauhini Studios." -setnence is too long
"A house set was erected in Vijaya Vauhini Studios," -what city is this again for people unfamiliar with the industry? You can delink Hyderabad further down in release then if it's Hyderabad.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail: Your writing Pavan and those who helped copyedit and write it is very good and surely improving. Makes reviewing it much easier when people have taken the time to read and copyedit. Well done!♦
Dr. Blofeld17:04, 14 March 2016 (UTC)reply
"The film was partially inspired by William Shakespeare's comedy The Taming of the Shrew and is the official remake of B. Vittalacharya's Kannada film Mane Thumbida Hennu (1958), and the first remake by Vijaya Vauhini Studios." -setnence is too long
"A house set was erected in Vijaya Vauhini Studios," -what city is this again for people unfamiliar with the industry? You can delink Hyderabad further down in release then if it's Hyderabad.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail: Your writing Pavan and those who helped copyedit and write it is very good and surely improving. Makes reviewing it much easier when people have taken the time to read and copyedit. Well done!♦
Dr. Blofeld17:04, 14 March 2016 (UTC)reply