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Some comments

Looking over this article and a number that are related, I have some minor copyediting suggestions:

  • Technical terms should generally be explained inline, for instance:
    • the missing "spheroolithid" appears to mean "the grouping of fossil eggs that are mostly spherical"
    • clicking "oogenus" takes you to an article that does not clearly explain it
    • "Barremian of the Maestrazgo" seem to refer to geographical locations, but are actually referring to times, which is not at all clear
  • Many of the terms are alternately capitalized or not
  • A number of redlinks refer to people who are unlikely to ever meet notability, and should be unlinked

Maury Markowitz ( talk) 14:45, 28 January 2016 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Some comments

Looking over this article and a number that are related, I have some minor copyediting suggestions:

  • Technical terms should generally be explained inline, for instance:
    • the missing "spheroolithid" appears to mean "the grouping of fossil eggs that are mostly spherical"
    • clicking "oogenus" takes you to an article that does not clearly explain it
    • "Barremian of the Maestrazgo" seem to refer to geographical locations, but are actually referring to times, which is not at all clear
  • Many of the terms are alternately capitalized or not
  • A number of redlinks refer to people who are unlikely to ever meet notability, and should be unlinked

Maury Markowitz ( talk) 14:45, 28 January 2016 (UTC) reply


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