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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) ( talk · contribs) 15:17, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply

Prose

• Second paragraph in the lead should be split.
  • Done. Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 17:05, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
• Putting the same citations over and over again is unecessary (per WP:OVERCITE)
  • Agreed, but I don't think this particular article should be looked at as WP:OVERCITE. Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 17:05, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
    • Jonas with due respect, I think it could use some tweaking, and I did so per reviewer suggestion; so done. Kierzek ( talk) 19:27, 29 July 2015 (UTC) reply
• Put the citations in order
  • Sorry, I don't understand what you mean by this? Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 17:05, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
    • I mean reorder citations that look like this: "[8][7]"
      • I don't see a single reference like that in the article. Are you sure you see some? Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 20:05, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
        • Done. Kierzek ( talk) 19:27, 29 July 2015 (UTC) reply
          • Check the "Political career" section.-- Tomandjerry211 (alt) ( talk) 21:30, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
            • I've done that, but still can't find any... after all, all references in the article can be seen in the "References" section and there are no such citations in there! Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 11:33, 28 July 2015 (UTC) reply
• Duplicate link to Lower Bavaria
  • Fixed. Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 17:05, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply

References

• Standardize locations of the publishers in the printed sources.-- Tomandjerry211 (alt) ( talk) 15:17, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
  • Location of printed sources are not mandatory; it's an option. Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 17:05, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
    • I meant to either put locations for all of the sources or remove them all.-- Tomandjerry211 (alt) ( talk) 19:00, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
      • Like above, I also don't see any locations being mentioned in either the printed or online source subsections...? Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 20:05, 27 July 2015 (UTC) reply
        • Printed sources #5 and 6
          • Fixed. Jonas Vinther • ( Click here to collect your price!) 11:31, 28 July 2015 (UTC) reply

Tomandjerry211, on behalf of Jonas and myself, thanks for another GA review. Cheers, Kierzek ( talk) 12:59, 31 July 2015 (UTC) reply