"only twelve points" → "only 12 points" per
MOS:NUM
Remove "The Greek national broadcaster" introduction to Hellenic Broadcasting Corporation (ERT)
Not all of the "such as" part appears to be sourced, unless Google translate is not working properly for me
"in the 2012 contest citing to the contest's" → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2012, citing the contest's"
Before Eurovision
Ellinikós Telikós 2012
"reaffirming that they would" → "reaffirming that Greece would"
The source only mentions that a record label was seeked for participation, not anything about it being major
The types of costs mentions do not appear to be sourced
For the above two items, To Paron (translated) For this reason, ERT consulted the largest record companies that have an international network or are national divisions of international networks, in order to participate in the costs of our participation in the Competition (such as the production and recording of candidate songs , cd production, promotions, fees for creative and artistic contributors, travel and accommodation in Baku, etc.). I have added this ref to the end of the sentence pair.
Grk1011 (
talk)
17:26, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"on a national final titled" → "on a national final entitled"
Competing entries
"and Velvet Fire were" → "and Velvet Fire, were" but apart from the Universal Music Greece part, the info of the first two sentence does not appear to be sourced
The
Hellenic Radio stations part is not directly mentioned by the source
It was much easier to write about an entry that I liked! Most of the sources were easy to locate, though for a couple items I removed some extra detail that wasn't obvious from the sources. Should be good to go unless I inadvertently introduced new issues!
Grk1011 (
talk)
17:26, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Grk1011 This is a well-written article on your part evidently; about the types of costs mentions, I made sure specifically at the time to write "do not appear to be sourced" since I knew there could be a translation issue. ✓Pass now, you worked through the issues well even if it reduced size at points like you said! --
K. Peake18:48, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"only twelve points" → "only 12 points" per
MOS:NUM
Remove "The Greek national broadcaster" introduction to Hellenic Broadcasting Corporation (ERT)
Not all of the "such as" part appears to be sourced, unless Google translate is not working properly for me
"in the 2012 contest citing to the contest's" → "in the Eurovision Song Contest 2012, citing the contest's"
Before Eurovision
Ellinikós Telikós 2012
"reaffirming that they would" → "reaffirming that Greece would"
The source only mentions that a record label was seeked for participation, not anything about it being major
The types of costs mentions do not appear to be sourced
For the above two items, To Paron (translated) For this reason, ERT consulted the largest record companies that have an international network or are national divisions of international networks, in order to participate in the costs of our participation in the Competition (such as the production and recording of candidate songs , cd production, promotions, fees for creative and artistic contributors, travel and accommodation in Baku, etc.). I have added this ref to the end of the sentence pair.
Grk1011 (
talk)
17:26, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"on a national final titled" → "on a national final entitled"
Competing entries
"and Velvet Fire were" → "and Velvet Fire, were" but apart from the Universal Music Greece part, the info of the first two sentence does not appear to be sourced
The
Hellenic Radio stations part is not directly mentioned by the source
It was much easier to write about an entry that I liked! Most of the sources were easy to locate, though for a couple items I removed some extra detail that wasn't obvious from the sources. Should be good to go unless I inadvertently introduced new issues!
Grk1011 (
talk)
17:26, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Grk1011 This is a well-written article on your part evidently; about the types of costs mentions, I made sure specifically at the time to write "do not appear to be sourced" since I knew there could be a translation issue. ✓Pass now, you worked through the issues well even if it reduced size at points like you said! --
K. Peake18:48, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply