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Reviewer: Adabow ( talk) 10:54, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Some issues, I have described them by criterion and section, specifying which paragraph in the section the issue occurs.
Some minor capitalisation and spelling problems
Pretty good, however the infobox uses contains hyphens, and should instead contain spaced
en dashes, and there are some
dab links to fix
No major issues
Citation 6 is dead—try to find an archived copy or a replacement reference
No major issues
Detailed on history, funding and performances. Is there enough material to create a section on public reception or popularity?
The 'performances' section is quite detailed. I am supposing that the festival is set to continue in the future, and this section could become quite large. It would be good to start to write a List of Grant Park Music Festival performances, to relieve some of the pressure on this section.
No major issues
No edit warring, no frequent vandalism
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Adabow (
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00:25, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
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Very good captioning
I have placed the review on hold, and will allow seven days for the issues outlined above to be rectified. Good luck improving the article!
Adabow (
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10:54, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Adabow ( talk) 10:54, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Some issues, I have described them by criterion and section, specifying which paragraph in the section the issue occurs.
Some minor capitalisation and spelling problems
Pretty good, however the infobox uses contains hyphens, and should instead contain spaced
en dashes, and there are some
dab links to fix
No major issues
Citation 6 is dead—try to find an archived copy or a replacement reference
No major issues
Detailed on history, funding and performances. Is there enough material to create a section on public reception or popularity?
The 'performances' section is quite detailed. I am supposing that the festival is set to continue in the future, and this section could become quite large. It would be good to start to write a List of Grant Park Music Festival performances, to relieve some of the pressure on this section.
No major issues
No edit warring, no frequent vandalism
{{
PD-USGov}}
tag, the {{
PD-user-en}}
tag is not needed.
Adabow (
talk)
00:25, 2 May 2010 (UTC)
{{
PD-user-en}}
Very good captioning
I have placed the review on hold, and will allow seven days for the issues outlined above to be rectified. Good luck improving the article!
Adabow (
talk)
10:54, 30 April 2010 (UTC)