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French space agency funded the operation of the
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Granat after the
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This article's Good Article promotion has been put on hold. During review, some issues were discovered that can be resolved without a major re-write. This is how the article, as of December 5, 2007, compares against the six good article criteria:
Please address these matters soon and then leave a note here showing how they have been resolved. After 48 hours the article should be reviewed again. If these issues are not addressed within 7 days, the article may be failed without further notice. Thank you for your work so far.— Ruslik ( talk) 09:56, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
Comments:
1) Please, write cm2 instead of cm2. It does not look good. Please, also fix other super/subscripts, i.e. "5 x 10-8 - 5 x 10-7".
2) 'Launch and orbit' section says nothing about the ultimate fate of Granat. Judging from the table (perigee) it reentered earth's atmosphere sometime after 1 June 1999. I think, this fact should be mentioned in the text.
3) Parameteres of SIGMA telescope given in different sources are not the same. I think the values from ref5 should be used (not from NASA).
4) The ATS-S instrument is not an imaging telescope. However in the current subsection this fact is not made clear. The reader can only guess that it is not imaging from the lack of information about resolution.
5) The article has too few citations. Section 'Spacecraft' does have them at all. This should be fixed (including infobox). At least every paragraph should have a citation.
6) Many references are naked weblinks. I think titles, authors, publishers, dates of publications need to be provided.
7) The lead should mention the names of all seven instruments, not only WATCH.
Ruslik ( talk) 09:56, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
In its current form the article does satisfy GA Critaria, so I will promote it. For the future: when you wright the word "Done", put Done ({{done}}) template before it. It will make your answers more recognisable.
Ruslik (
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09:39, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
Thx for the help and for the promotion. I'm glad it's a GA now :D
RIP-Acer (
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16:37, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
With the best will in the world, I just noticed and fixed several errors in here. I have the good fortune[? a mixed blessing, to be sure] to have worked in gamma-ray astronomy for a number of years. It is not reasonable to expect a non-expert editor to be able to catch all of these, and I am grateful that there is a GRANAT article of such quality, and congratulate those responsible. Still, I hope we can get other experienced folks to help out with proofreading etc, as I have only given it a cursory once-over. Wwheaton ( talk) 21:37, 23 May 2008 (UTC)
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October 23, 2007. The text of the entry was: Did you know ...that the
French space agency funded the operation of the
Soviet
space observatory
Granat after the
dissolution of the USSR? |
This article's Good Article promotion has been put on hold. During review, some issues were discovered that can be resolved without a major re-write. This is how the article, as of December 5, 2007, compares against the six good article criteria:
Please address these matters soon and then leave a note here showing how they have been resolved. After 48 hours the article should be reviewed again. If these issues are not addressed within 7 days, the article may be failed without further notice. Thank you for your work so far.— Ruslik ( talk) 09:56, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
Comments:
1) Please, write cm2 instead of cm2. It does not look good. Please, also fix other super/subscripts, i.e. "5 x 10-8 - 5 x 10-7".
2) 'Launch and orbit' section says nothing about the ultimate fate of Granat. Judging from the table (perigee) it reentered earth's atmosphere sometime after 1 June 1999. I think, this fact should be mentioned in the text.
3) Parameteres of SIGMA telescope given in different sources are not the same. I think the values from ref5 should be used (not from NASA).
4) The ATS-S instrument is not an imaging telescope. However in the current subsection this fact is not made clear. The reader can only guess that it is not imaging from the lack of information about resolution.
5) The article has too few citations. Section 'Spacecraft' does have them at all. This should be fixed (including infobox). At least every paragraph should have a citation.
6) Many references are naked weblinks. I think titles, authors, publishers, dates of publications need to be provided.
7) The lead should mention the names of all seven instruments, not only WATCH.
Ruslik ( talk) 09:56, 5 December 2007 (UTC)
In its current form the article does satisfy GA Critaria, so I will promote it. For the future: when you wright the word "Done", put Done ({{done}}) template before it. It will make your answers more recognisable.
Ruslik (
talk)
09:39, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
Thx for the help and for the promotion. I'm glad it's a GA now :D
RIP-Acer (
talk)
16:37, 9 December 2007 (UTC)
With the best will in the world, I just noticed and fixed several errors in here. I have the good fortune[? a mixed blessing, to be sure] to have worked in gamma-ray astronomy for a number of years. It is not reasonable to expect a non-expert editor to be able to catch all of these, and I am grateful that there is a GRANAT article of such quality, and congratulate those responsible. Still, I hope we can get other experienced folks to help out with proofreading etc, as I have only given it a cursory once-over. Wwheaton ( talk) 21:37, 23 May 2008 (UTC)
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