critics -> music critics and link to music journalism
changed
Done
Background and release
"It was then scheduled to be released to iTunes for digital download and streaming on October 5, 2010" - sounds like it was canceled, needs to be re-written
changed
Done
Music and lyrics
I see no point in the image given here as its footer it is the same as the first sentence in this section.
changed, hope this is now okay?
Because of copyvio's possible violations, let's trim Zolciak quote or rephrase it. See
Earwig's Copyvio Detector.
changed
Done
Critical reception
music critics ->link to music journalism
changed
"and the song as a masterpiece." -> "and to the song as a masterpiece."
changed
Done
Track listing
Remove, per one listing of the song is non-essential.
removed
Done
Release history
The second date has the same references twice. Reference 13 and on the end of Note B, I would remove the former, since Note B already has those sources.
changed
Done
Notes
Fine
References
Vulture needs "url-access=limited"
changed
A source check has been conducted on references 1, 3, 5, 8, 9, 11, 14, 15 and 18
Done
Overall
On hold for seven days. Please let me know once you are done.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk) 10:08, 1 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Lil-unique1 The copyvio is still quite high; 40,5%. Try to use your own words, instead. I also made some small changes, see if you are ok with those.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk) 13:20, 4 July 2022 (UTC)reply
critics -> music critics and link to music journalism
changed
Done
Background and release
"It was then scheduled to be released to iTunes for digital download and streaming on October 5, 2010" - sounds like it was canceled, needs to be re-written
changed
Done
Music and lyrics
I see no point in the image given here as its footer it is the same as the first sentence in this section.
changed, hope this is now okay?
Because of copyvio's possible violations, let's trim Zolciak quote or rephrase it. See
Earwig's Copyvio Detector.
changed
Done
Critical reception
music critics ->link to music journalism
changed
"and the song as a masterpiece." -> "and to the song as a masterpiece."
changed
Done
Track listing
Remove, per one listing of the song is non-essential.
removed
Done
Release history
The second date has the same references twice. Reference 13 and on the end of Note B, I would remove the former, since Note B already has those sources.
changed
Done
Notes
Fine
References
Vulture needs "url-access=limited"
changed
A source check has been conducted on references 1, 3, 5, 8, 9, 11, 14, 15 and 18
Done
Overall
On hold for seven days. Please let me know once you are done.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk) 10:08, 1 June 2022 (UTC)reply
Lil-unique1 The copyvio is still quite high; 40,5%. Try to use your own words, instead. I also made some small changes, see if you are ok with those.
MarioSoulTruthFan (
talk) 13:20, 4 July 2022 (UTC)reply