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When will S2 premiere?
This is my nephew's favorite show, I just want to know
Is the show cancelled?
It has been almost a year of no new episodes and no word on continuation on — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Barbiegirl303 (
talk •
contribs) 01:48, 21 July 2017 (UTC)reply
Beatriz Shantal is not Goldie Original Voice
You know
Beatriz Shantal is not the Voice of Goldie or the Latin Dub you know she does Many Lies for that Respect the Original.
"Lawsuit" section is placed at the bottom of the article so does not interfere with
WP:Undue. Opinions are carefully attributed to a source. Neutral tone achieved.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
Comments: I see that this is certainly not your first GAN article
User:Pamzeis. This looks good and deserves a pass! — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Chilicave (
talk •
contribs) 22:27, 9 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Hiya,
Chilicave! Do you have any suggestions for the article itself? I'd be happy to implement anything you feel could be improved. I will note that your comment on due weight doesn't seem entirely accurate. In general, it doesn't matter where in the article the material is, but how much of the article is devoted to said material. For example, if I made 90% of the article about the lawsuit, that wouldn't be due weight (unless it was an exceptional case) even if it were placed last in the article. If you feel the article satisfies the
good article criteria, you can follow the instructions listed at
WP:GAI#PASS.
Pamzeis (
talk) 09:16, 11 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Pamzeis Thanks for being patient with my "newness" to the process!
1. You are absolutely right! I'm fully aware of WP:Undue, but wanted to incorporate something to showcase my efforts in reviewing the article to the best of my ability. Specifically, I was referring to this line "Undue weight can be given in several ways, including but not limited to the depth of detail, the quantity of text, prominence of placement, the juxtaposition of statements, and the use of imagery."
2. I do have two minor suggestions/questions about the article itself, but since the guideline said "reasonably well-written", I thought that it's not a big deal.
Since you're open to my thoughts though:
Lead
a. Perhaps another word to use in place of "greenlit" to encompass a general audience? Only because I haven't seen a common use of it in the leads of other TV/film articles. If you want to leave it in there, you could add a wiki-link to it instead.
I've linked the term, but I'm iffy on using "approved" or similar since "greenlit" has a more specific meaning that could be misinterpreted if a synonyms were used
b. Inspired by the fairy tale "Goldilocks and the Three Bears", the show focuses on Goldie and Bear, who become best friends following an incident at his house.
This bit seems a little vague. Correct me if I'm wrong but does the TV show re-imagine the aftermath of the series of events that transpire in "Goldilocks and the Three Bears" or is it just an incident?
A bit confused on what you're suggesting here. So, basically, from what I remember from watching the show years ago, Goldie does everything that happens in the fairy tale, then she apologises to Bear, and they become best friends. I've never read "Goldilocks", but doesn't the entire story just consist of this specific incident?
Overall, it looks good to me.
Chilicave (
talk) 18:15, 11 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Ooh yes, one more thing.
Per the guideline
MOS:INFOBOXPURPOSE, I saw that comedy was mentioned in the info box but not in the article itself. Any particular reason for that?
Chilicave (
talk) 18:54, 11 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Eh, there's just not anywhere to put it, really. I've seen the same thing done at FAs like HSMTMTS.
Pamzeis (
talk) 09:41, 12 August 2023 (UTC)reply
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When will S2 premiere?
This is my nephew's favorite show, I just want to know
Is the show cancelled?
It has been almost a year of no new episodes and no word on continuation on — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Barbiegirl303 (
talk •
contribs) 01:48, 21 July 2017 (UTC)reply
Beatriz Shantal is not Goldie Original Voice
You know
Beatriz Shantal is not the Voice of Goldie or the Latin Dub you know she does Many Lies for that Respect the Original.
"Lawsuit" section is placed at the bottom of the article so does not interfere with
WP:Undue. Opinions are carefully attributed to a source. Neutral tone achieved.
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
Comments: I see that this is certainly not your first GAN article
User:Pamzeis. This looks good and deserves a pass! — Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Chilicave (
talk •
contribs) 22:27, 9 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Hiya,
Chilicave! Do you have any suggestions for the article itself? I'd be happy to implement anything you feel could be improved. I will note that your comment on due weight doesn't seem entirely accurate. In general, it doesn't matter where in the article the material is, but how much of the article is devoted to said material. For example, if I made 90% of the article about the lawsuit, that wouldn't be due weight (unless it was an exceptional case) even if it were placed last in the article. If you feel the article satisfies the
good article criteria, you can follow the instructions listed at
WP:GAI#PASS.
Pamzeis (
talk) 09:16, 11 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Pamzeis Thanks for being patient with my "newness" to the process!
1. You are absolutely right! I'm fully aware of WP:Undue, but wanted to incorporate something to showcase my efforts in reviewing the article to the best of my ability. Specifically, I was referring to this line "Undue weight can be given in several ways, including but not limited to the depth of detail, the quantity of text, prominence of placement, the juxtaposition of statements, and the use of imagery."
2. I do have two minor suggestions/questions about the article itself, but since the guideline said "reasonably well-written", I thought that it's not a big deal.
Since you're open to my thoughts though:
Lead
a. Perhaps another word to use in place of "greenlit" to encompass a general audience? Only because I haven't seen a common use of it in the leads of other TV/film articles. If you want to leave it in there, you could add a wiki-link to it instead.
I've linked the term, but I'm iffy on using "approved" or similar since "greenlit" has a more specific meaning that could be misinterpreted if a synonyms were used
b. Inspired by the fairy tale "Goldilocks and the Three Bears", the show focuses on Goldie and Bear, who become best friends following an incident at his house.
This bit seems a little vague. Correct me if I'm wrong but does the TV show re-imagine the aftermath of the series of events that transpire in "Goldilocks and the Three Bears" or is it just an incident?
A bit confused on what you're suggesting here. So, basically, from what I remember from watching the show years ago, Goldie does everything that happens in the fairy tale, then she apologises to Bear, and they become best friends. I've never read "Goldilocks", but doesn't the entire story just consist of this specific incident?
Overall, it looks good to me.
Chilicave (
talk) 18:15, 11 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Ooh yes, one more thing.
Per the guideline
MOS:INFOBOXPURPOSE, I saw that comedy was mentioned in the info box but not in the article itself. Any particular reason for that?
Chilicave (
talk) 18:54, 11 August 2023 (UTC)reply
Eh, there's just not anywhere to put it, really. I've seen the same thing done at FAs like HSMTMTS.
Pamzeis (
talk) 09:41, 12 August 2023 (UTC)reply