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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 04:00, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
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- "Debuting in 2005," Just commenting the same I told you about the link on my first GoW review, that it could lead to confusion. It's okay to leave it there, I guess, although it'll do better as a see also.
- "Each collection has received praise for the remastering of the games and their price." I think it's better to say that "were praised for how the games were remastered, as well as their price."
- God of War Collection
- "was included with early copies of the game.", Which game? GoW2?
- What is a sweepstakes?
- Fixed all the above. Wikilinked sweepstakes (they're promotional/marketing strategies, usually like a contest to raise hype for a product). --
JDC808
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05:23, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry for the wait. This will be done in no more than two days :) —
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01:56, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
- No problem. Been playing Final Fantasy XIII-2, which I just platinumed yesterday. -- JDC808 ♫ 10:20, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry for the wait. This will be done in no more than two days :) —
ΛΧΣ
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01:56, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed all the above. Wikilinked sweepstakes (they're promotional/marketing strategies, usually like a contest to raise hype for a product). --
JDC808
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05:23, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
- Well. The article is good. Additional nitpicky comments will be left on the talk. I'll be closing this as successful. — ΛΧΣ 21 21:26, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Hahc21 ( talk · contribs) 04:00, 15 December 2012 (UTC)
Review
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- "Debuting in 2005," Just commenting the same I told you about the link on my first GoW review, that it could lead to confusion. It's okay to leave it there, I guess, although it'll do better as a see also.
- "Each collection has received praise for the remastering of the games and their price." I think it's better to say that "were praised for how the games were remastered, as well as their price."
- God of War Collection
- "was included with early copies of the game.", Which game? GoW2?
- What is a sweepstakes?
- Fixed all the above. Wikilinked sweepstakes (they're promotional/marketing strategies, usually like a contest to raise hype for a product). --
JDC808
♫
05:23, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry for the wait. This will be done in no more than two days :) —
ΛΧΣ
21
01:56, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
- No problem. Been playing Final Fantasy XIII-2, which I just platinumed yesterday. -- JDC808 ♫ 10:20, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
- Sorry for the wait. This will be done in no more than two days :) —
ΛΧΣ
21
01:56, 28 December 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed all the above. Wikilinked sweepstakes (they're promotional/marketing strategies, usually like a contest to raise hype for a product). --
JDC808
♫
05:23, 19 December 2012 (UTC)
- Well. The article is good. Additional nitpicky comments will be left on the talk. I'll be closing this as successful. — ΛΧΣ 21 21:26, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.