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It is reasonably well written .
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar) :
b. (
MoS for
lead ,
layout ,
word choice ,
fiction , and
lists ) :
It is factually accurate and
verifiable .
a. (
reference section ) :
b. (citations to
reliable sources ) :
c. (
OR ) :
d. (
copyvio and
plagiarism ) :
It is broad in its coverage .
a. (
major aspects ) :
b. (
focused ) :
It follows the
neutral point of view policy .
Fair representation without bias :
It is stable .
No edit wars, etc. :
It is illustrated by
images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have
non-free use rationales ) :
b. (
appropriate use with
suitable captions ) :
Overall :
Pass/fail :
(Criteria marked
are unassessed)
This is quite an old nomination for the GAN backlog! --
K. Peake
08:19, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
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Infobox and lead
The exact release date needs to be sourced in the body as 18th August
Same for the recording months
Sony Music Studios, Sydney → Sony Music, Sydney
The lead is quite disordered at the moment; the first sentence should be followed by the info currently in the second para, then reception and awards followed by commercial performance and legacy
"It debuted at number one" → "The album debuted at number one"
Mention it was certified platinum in Australia and by the
Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA)
"the album won four awards" → "four awards were won by Gang of Youths"
"Go Farther in Lightness ' s lyrics focus" → "its lyrics focus"
"bleakness and triumph,"" → "bleakness and triumph"," per
MOS:QUOTE
Shouldn't the tour be mentioned by name in the lead?
"where three tracks from the album placed" → "where three other tracks placed"
"was critically acclaimed by reviewers and" → "was acclaimed by music critics and"
"It topped the annual" → "A top position was achieved the annual"
"and two of its tracks featured" → "and two of the tracks featured"
Background
Add the "I don't think" part to end the frontman's quote
Where is the EP release sourced in relation to his quote?
No visa complications are sourced
Composition
I think swapping these sub-sections would make for the correct order
Lyricism
"something you love,"" → "something you love"," per MOS:QUOTE – these are throughout when you have punctuation inside quotes at unsuitable points
Where are the recurring themes sourced?
Pipe soul to
Human spirit
Production and recording
Wikilink
Darlinghurst to itself
Avoid any usage of claim per
WP:CLAIM
Audio sample looks good!
I have noticed more MOS:QUOTE issues in this sub-section, as I explained for the other one
"interludes for the album" → "interludes for Go Farther in Lightness "
The interpolation is not sourced
Release
Retitle to Release and promotion
Wikilink
David Le'aupepe on the img text
The release date is sourced as 9 February with no music video, mention this was the lead single from Go Father in Lightness too
"They would later perform" → "Gang of Youths would later perform"
The ARIA position needs a source and the link should be to ARIA Charts
"was released on 26 July" → "was released on 26 July 2017"
The sixth and final single is not sourced
Remove wikilink on Australian Albums Chart and this needs to be sourced; if not, change the information
Reword the certification sentence to saying the album was certified in Australia by the
Australian Recording Industry Association (ARIA) with the number of copies
Tour
"made their United States TV" → "made their US TV" per
MOS:US
"The band toured" → "Gang of Youths toured"
"They performed for" → "The band performed for"
Critical reception
"received widespread critical acclaim." → "was met with widespread critical acclaim from music critics."
"calling it "a remarkable" → "calling the record "a remarkable"
MOS:QWQ issues again
"called the album "a" → "called Go Farther in Lightness "a"
Remove pipe on The Music
Legacy
"has been featured in" → "has led to rankings in" and end the sentence here, starting a new one for RS
"It also topped" → "The album also topped"
The Powderfinger, Chet Faker and 200 parts are not sourced
"Further, two more songs featured" → "Furthermore, two songs featured"
"has become the band's" → "has become Gang of Youth's"
Remove the 95 million part since it's not sourced
Table looks good!
Track listing
Personnel
Charts
Certifications
See also
References
Cite
Triple J as the sole publisher for all those refs and only wikilink on ref 6
Remove the publisher from refs 3, 13 and 49
Wikilink
Music Feeds only on ref 4
Remove or replace ref 15 per
WP:RSSM
What is ref 16 and why is it reliable?
Ref 18 is a duplicate of ref 4
Wikilink
Dropbox and move to via with Australian Recording Industry Association as publisher on ref 25
What exactly makes refs 27 and 31 reliable sources?
Wikilink
Renowned for Sound on ref 40
WP:OVERLINK of The Music on ref 47
Cite Double J as publisher instead and remove Australian Broadcasting Corporation on ref 49
Ref 52 is a duplicate of ref 42
Final comments and verdict