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"Known for his conservative views although many recognize his actions to be faithful to Christ and to Rome. " This is not a complete sentence. "He was known..." I suppose. But that word "although" is also problematic. Usually that would imply some presumed conflict between what it conjoins. "He was known for his conservative views although he supported the ordination of women" eg. Were his views so conservative that we could assume there might have been grounds to believe his actions were actually not faithful? And is faithfulness to Christ something Wikipedia is interested in? In any case, this sentence is not sourced, and the reference for the following sentence is not available. -- Richardson mcphillips ( talk) 03:42, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
Do we need to know that his brother was pastor of young Father Dolan etc? -- Richardson mcphillips ( talk) 03:44, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
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"Known for his conservative views although many recognize his actions to be faithful to Christ and to Rome. " This is not a complete sentence. "He was known..." I suppose. But that word "although" is also problematic. Usually that would imply some presumed conflict between what it conjoins. "He was known for his conservative views although he supported the ordination of women" eg. Were his views so conservative that we could assume there might have been grounds to believe his actions were actually not faithful? And is faithfulness to Christ something Wikipedia is interested in? In any case, this sentence is not sourced, and the reference for the following sentence is not available. -- Richardson mcphillips ( talk) 03:42, 31 December 2018 (UTC)
Do we need to know that his brother was pastor of young Father Dolan etc? -- Richardson mcphillips ( talk) 03:44, 31 December 2018 (UTC)