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Reviewer: Kj cheetham ( talk · contribs) 11:30, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Starting review. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 11:30, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Some initial minor grammar suggestions, before I review the article more properly:
- Kj cheetham ( talk) 16:39, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Looking at the sections:
Early works on the project have already commenced, as of when? May want to use the {{as of}} template (as per WP:ASOF)?
NotOrrio, I've made a start on the review, please see above. I've not looked at sourcing yet though. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 17:40, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Sourcing spot-checks:
connected to Kingsway via a ramp on the station's eastern end?
NotOrrio, I'll put this on hold now to give you chance to address the points. Thanks. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 10:33, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
NotOrrio, P.S. Looking some more, I'm not convinced this is broad enough overall. For a station regularly getting over a million visitors a year and is almost 100 years old I'd expect more of a history.
Rebuilt 29 November 1964from the infobox should be explained in the main text.
The length of the platform is approximately 160 metres (520 ft), long enough for a Metro Trains 7-car High Capacity Metro Trains (HCMT)also needs a source. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 09:16, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Kj cheetham ( talk · contribs) 11:30, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Starting review. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 11:30, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Some initial minor grammar suggestions, before I review the article more properly:
- Kj cheetham ( talk) 16:39, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Looking at the sections:
Early works on the project have already commenced, as of when? May want to use the {{as of}} template (as per WP:ASOF)?
NotOrrio, I've made a start on the review, please see above. I've not looked at sourcing yet though. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 17:40, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
Sourcing spot-checks:
connected to Kingsway via a ramp on the station's eastern end?
NotOrrio, I'll put this on hold now to give you chance to address the points. Thanks. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 10:33, 28 August 2023 (UTC)
NotOrrio, P.S. Looking some more, I'm not convinced this is broad enough overall. For a station regularly getting over a million visitors a year and is almost 100 years old I'd expect more of a history.
Rebuilt 29 November 1964from the infobox should be explained in the main text.
The length of the platform is approximately 160 metres (520 ft), long enough for a Metro Trains 7-car High Capacity Metro Trains (HCMT)also needs a source. - Kj cheetham ( talk) 09:16, 30 August 2023 (UTC)