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The article fails criterias #1 #2 and #4.
Additionally, the sentence "Gilberto has indicated that after his current contract finishes at Arsenal, he wants to return to Brazil to play club football." seems totally out of place. And the WC 2006 section should be before the 2006-07 season section, simply because that is the chronological chain of events. Also, the club statistics could be merged into one big table, much like Daniel Agger (and I guess very many others). Poulsen 17:20, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
This feedback was left about the Gilberto Silva article:
This was left in my user talk page. (Thanks goes to green catepillar.)
I saw the message in my talk page and I went quickly through the article once again. It is much much better and I donot think it will have any problem to become GA. These are my suggestions for further improvement:
In any case, this is a great improvement. Continue this way and the article will be just great!-- Yannismarou 17:43, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
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{{persondata}}
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between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
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This is overall a great article, but I did notice a few problems...
Normally this is true, but below, QmunkE points out why this article is an exception
Now sourced.
Not sourced. I must have made this up.
I didn't make this one up since it was never documented everywhere, but fans did assume this. Removed claim from article as I won't find a source for it.
BAM! Now sourced.
I agree. Fixetated.
Provided that these objections are taken care of, I have no problem passing this article for Good status. I am putting this article on hold to give you time to address these concerns. Cheers for such a great article! Deyyaz [ Talk | Contribs ] 16:34, 8 October 2006 (UTC)
Hey, thanks for your prompt response to my suggestions and please accept by apologies for not being as prompt.(I forgot to change the status on my user page). While I think that it sounds more professional by referring to a person by their last name in an article, I will relent in this case as I feel it does not detract from the quality of the article. Anyways, I accepted your invitation to look through the article again and found a few more things that I couldn't consciously let pass.
I think you meant the 2nd paragraph from Early career; I agree with this. I removed a sentence which I must have made up again, and added a tibia ref.
I added a reference for both the Madrid and Juventus games. I linked to two match reports which describe his performances as good.
BAM! Cited.
Besides these things, and a few awkwardly worded sentences, this article is golden. The love you put into it certainly shows. A word of advice, this article probably should be looked over by a skilled copyeditor, however I will not object on the account of a few awkward sentences. After these last concerns are dealt with I will proudly promote this to Good Article Status. Deyyaz [ Talk | Contribs ] 02:57, 9 October 2006 (UTC)
Hi all, good comprehensive article. I wonder if this sentence is correct: "...having gone over 45 games without receiving a booking on two occasions during his Arsenal career". Do you mean that he received only two bookings over the 45 games of his Arsenal career? It currently reads as if he's got bookings on all BUT 2 occasions! Perhaps "...having received only two bookings in his 45 career appearances for Arsenal". Also I'd like to clean up some of the punctuation (mainly on comma usage as I'm a stickler for it) if you don't mind...-- Rob2000 12:20, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
Hi there, I've gone through making mostly comma changes and a few similar grammatical alterations. I had a couple of other suggestions too:
GilbertoSilvaFan 15:25, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
- GilbertoSilvaFan 15:25, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
Gilberto's early club stats are almost complete. I've used what information I could find on http://www.footballdatabase.com/site/players/index.php?dumpPlayer=1095, but the 1997 and 1998 season needs adding. Any knowledge or sources regarding his early career days would be muchly appreciated.
Thank you, -- GilbertoSilvaFan 12:45, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
Volante is not a nickname. In Spanish or Portuguese its is the name given to a defensive midfielder.
Here are a few notes, to nobody in particular, about the spoken version of this article which I added recently.
The goals section is ballooning. While his recent run of goals is good for Gilberto, it isn't so good for his goal table. Should it be removed from the article? Added to a subpage? Left as it is? Your comments would be much appreciated. Please take a look and post what you think! Thanks :-) GilbertoSilvaFan 09:39, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
Right. I went ahead with those changes yesterday, and after a speedy deletion tag was put on Gilberto Silva goals, I managed to convince User:ArglebargleIV that the article should stay. Check Talk:Gilberto_Silva_goals for details. If anyone has comments or suggestions about the new page, please do post them! GilbertoSilvaFan 11:03, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
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Has "qualities" (pictures, links, and many subheadings), and an infobox. However, the article should be expanded. Green caterpillar 20:53, 8 September 2006 (UTC) == Assessment by the Football WikiProject== Hi! What I meant with my comment was that it needs much work to go higher than GA-class, I expressed myself a little bit unclear. I saw it was up on GA nomination, but I am not very good at judging which articles are GA-class and which are not, so we'll have to see if it is good enough already. However, to be rated even higher, that is, A- or FA-class, it needs a lot of work, more text, incorporation of the trivia and court cases in the main text body, and just general fixes. See Denis Law for an example of a FA-class player article. Hope this helps a little. – Elisson • Talk 19:15, 8 September 2006 (UTC) |
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The article fails criterias #1 #2 and #4.
Additionally, the sentence "Gilberto has indicated that after his current contract finishes at Arsenal, he wants to return to Brazil to play club football." seems totally out of place. And the WC 2006 section should be before the 2006-07 season section, simply because that is the chronological chain of events. Also, the club statistics could be merged into one big table, much like Daniel Agger (and I guess very many others). Poulsen 17:20, 12 September 2006 (UTC)
This feedback was left about the Gilberto Silva article:
This was left in my user talk page. (Thanks goes to green catepillar.)
I saw the message in my talk page and I went quickly through the article once again. It is much much better and I donot think it will have any problem to become GA. These are my suggestions for further improvement:
In any case, this is a great improvement. Continue this way and the article will be just great!-- Yannismarou 17:43, 24 September 2006 (UTC)
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
{{persondata}}
along with the required parameters to the article - see
Wikipedia:Persondata for more information.
between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 18mm, use 18 mm, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 18 mm.
[2]You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas.
This is overall a great article, but I did notice a few problems...
Normally this is true, but below, QmunkE points out why this article is an exception
Now sourced.
Not sourced. I must have made this up.
I didn't make this one up since it was never documented everywhere, but fans did assume this. Removed claim from article as I won't find a source for it.
BAM! Now sourced.
I agree. Fixetated.
Provided that these objections are taken care of, I have no problem passing this article for Good status. I am putting this article on hold to give you time to address these concerns. Cheers for such a great article! Deyyaz [ Talk | Contribs ] 16:34, 8 October 2006 (UTC)
Hey, thanks for your prompt response to my suggestions and please accept by apologies for not being as prompt.(I forgot to change the status on my user page). While I think that it sounds more professional by referring to a person by their last name in an article, I will relent in this case as I feel it does not detract from the quality of the article. Anyways, I accepted your invitation to look through the article again and found a few more things that I couldn't consciously let pass.
I think you meant the 2nd paragraph from Early career; I agree with this. I removed a sentence which I must have made up again, and added a tibia ref.
I added a reference for both the Madrid and Juventus games. I linked to two match reports which describe his performances as good.
BAM! Cited.
Besides these things, and a few awkwardly worded sentences, this article is golden. The love you put into it certainly shows. A word of advice, this article probably should be looked over by a skilled copyeditor, however I will not object on the account of a few awkward sentences. After these last concerns are dealt with I will proudly promote this to Good Article Status. Deyyaz [ Talk | Contribs ] 02:57, 9 October 2006 (UTC)
Hi all, good comprehensive article. I wonder if this sentence is correct: "...having gone over 45 games without receiving a booking on two occasions during his Arsenal career". Do you mean that he received only two bookings over the 45 games of his Arsenal career? It currently reads as if he's got bookings on all BUT 2 occasions! Perhaps "...having received only two bookings in his 45 career appearances for Arsenal". Also I'd like to clean up some of the punctuation (mainly on comma usage as I'm a stickler for it) if you don't mind...-- Rob2000 12:20, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
Hi there, I've gone through making mostly comma changes and a few similar grammatical alterations. I had a couple of other suggestions too:
GilbertoSilvaFan 15:25, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
- GilbertoSilvaFan 15:25, 12 October 2006 (UTC)
Gilberto's early club stats are almost complete. I've used what information I could find on http://www.footballdatabase.com/site/players/index.php?dumpPlayer=1095, but the 1997 and 1998 season needs adding. Any knowledge or sources regarding his early career days would be muchly appreciated.
Thank you, -- GilbertoSilvaFan 12:45, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
Volante is not a nickname. In Spanish or Portuguese its is the name given to a defensive midfielder.
Here are a few notes, to nobody in particular, about the spoken version of this article which I added recently.
The goals section is ballooning. While his recent run of goals is good for Gilberto, it isn't so good for his goal table. Should it be removed from the article? Added to a subpage? Left as it is? Your comments would be much appreciated. Please take a look and post what you think! Thanks :-) GilbertoSilvaFan 09:39, 4 March 2007 (UTC)
Right. I went ahead with those changes yesterday, and after a speedy deletion tag was put on Gilberto Silva goals, I managed to convince User:ArglebargleIV that the article should stay. Check Talk:Gilberto_Silva_goals for details. If anyone has comments or suggestions about the new page, please do post them! GilbertoSilvaFan 11:03, 6 March 2007 (UTC)
The comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Gilberto Silva/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.
Comment(s) | Press [show] to view → |
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==
Assessment by the
Biography WikiProject team==
Has "qualities" (pictures, links, and many subheadings), and an infobox. However, the article should be expanded. Green caterpillar 20:53, 8 September 2006 (UTC) == Assessment by the Football WikiProject== Hi! What I meant with my comment was that it needs much work to go higher than GA-class, I expressed myself a little bit unclear. I saw it was up on GA nomination, but I am not very good at judging which articles are GA-class and which are not, so we'll have to see if it is good enough already. However, to be rated even higher, that is, A- or FA-class, it needs a lot of work, more text, incorporation of the trivia and court cases in the main text body, and just general fixes. See Denis Law for an example of a FA-class player article. Hope this helps a little. – Elisson • Talk 19:15, 8 September 2006 (UTC) |
Last edited at 01:23, 9 September 2006 (UTC). Substituted at 20:28, 3 May 2016 (UTC)