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I have revised the article significantly since the rejection. If anyone has any ideas for improvement, please send them my way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Akibah ( talkcontribs) 01:33, 23 April 2015‎

@ Akibah: I see this as a substantially enhanced version over the version I pushed back as a WP:AFC reviewer. Well done. May I commend {{ cite web}}, {{ Cite journal}}, {{ Cite news}}, {{ Cite book}} and others in that family to you? I know you have worked long and hard on the referencing. The reason I mention them is not that they are mandatory. I mention them because I think they will give you a better overall result. Their use is optional. My recommendation enhances the formatting of both the references and includes the notes. Not doing this will not impede a reviewer in their acceptance of the draft. Doing this will simply improve the look and feel of the eventual article. Fiddle Faddle 09:14, 23 April 2015 (UTC) reply
@ Timtrent: Akibah: I have corrected all of the 21 references using the Cite Templates instead of the ref commands. Does anyone have any other suggestions for me? Thanks for the help!
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Comments from contributing editor

I have revised the article significantly since the rejection. If anyone has any ideas for improvement, please send them my way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Akibah ( talkcontribs) 01:33, 23 April 2015‎

@ Akibah: I see this as a substantially enhanced version over the version I pushed back as a WP:AFC reviewer. Well done. May I commend {{ cite web}}, {{ Cite journal}}, {{ Cite news}}, {{ Cite book}} and others in that family to you? I know you have worked long and hard on the referencing. The reason I mention them is not that they are mandatory. I mention them because I think they will give you a better overall result. Their use is optional. My recommendation enhances the formatting of both the references and includes the notes. Not doing this will not impede a reviewer in their acceptance of the draft. Doing this will simply improve the look and feel of the eventual article. Fiddle Faddle 09:14, 23 April 2015 (UTC) reply
@ Timtrent: Akibah: I have corrected all of the 21 references using the Cite Templates instead of the ref commands. Does anyone have any other suggestions for me? Thanks for the help!

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