What's wrong with this? It's grammatically correct.
"which is responsible for the Commonwealth Games and Commonwealth Youth Games in Gibraltar." - This can be rather moved to the background section.
It's already there. Lead is supposed to be a summary of whole article.
"The Association selected ... different sports." Needs copy-editing. I would prefer "The Association selected a delegation of five male competitors, who participated in eleven events of three different sports."
Done
"semifinal of 200 m" - 200 m what???
Done
where he >> in which he
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athletics competitor - competitors should be plural
Done
Tell that Frank Warwick is a cyclist
Done
It seems that Sanderson participated in five events, and not six
Done
Link British Columbia
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23.25 seconds, 23.25 minutes, 23.25 hours, or 23.25 days? :P
What's wrong with this? It's grammatically correct.
"which is responsible for the Commonwealth Games and Commonwealth Youth Games in Gibraltar." - This can be rather moved to the background section.
It's already there. Lead is supposed to be a summary of whole article.
"The Association selected ... different sports." Needs copy-editing. I would prefer "The Association selected a delegation of five male competitors, who participated in eleven events of three different sports."
Done
"semifinal of 200 m" - 200 m what???
Done
where he >> in which he
Done
athletics competitor - competitors should be plural
Done
Tell that Frank Warwick is a cyclist
Done
It seems that Sanderson participated in five events, and not six
Done
Link British Columbia
Done
23.25 seconds, 23.25 minutes, 23.25 hours, or 23.25 days? :P