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Reviewer: Adabow ( talk · contribs) 00:36, 13 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Lead

• Include release date + label

Adding date, but lables are generally relegated to albums only.

Background and composition

• First sentence is unsourced

Added source

• "Baz Dresinger of of Blender" - lol extra 'of'

Done

• Link digital download and CD single

Done

• Include label

Done

• The performances section is a bit awkward here. Maybe create a section for it or place it in the music video section?

The reason I stuck it here is because there are not enough to warrant their own section, and music video was kind of lengthy itself, and the background/comp. was pretty short. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:55, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Critical reception

• Yahoo! Music has its own article, as does Yahoo! UK & Ireland

Done. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:57, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Chart performance

• Lead and table say Platinum cert, but this section says Gold?

Done

• Many of the charts are unreferenced in the prose

Done Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:58, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Music video

• Link CGI like you do in lead

Done

• "Channing Tatum and Jenna Dewan, the stars of Step Up make apperances" - comma after 'Up'

Done

• Déjà Vu needs quote marks

Done

• Beyonce → Beyoncé

Added [ sic] template as Adaso wrote it as such. Candy o32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 17:02, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

It's OK to change minor things like this per MOS:QUOTE, so I changed it. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 19:42, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply

Passing now. Adabow ( talk · contribs) 19:42, 23 December 2010 (UTC) reply