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Some Dude From North Carolina (
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14:52, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
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Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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14:52, 30 May 2021 (UTC)
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The "short description" goes above everything (
MOS:ORDER ).
Add alt text for the film poster (
WP:ALTTEXT ).
Use
plainlists instead of <br /> (
template rules ).
Is the reference after Ian Hendry necessary?
Same question for the one at the end of the 1st paragraph.
See
MOS:'S for when to use 's instead of s'.
"home town" → "hometown"
Shouldn't "north-east England" be written as
North East England ?
There are now 2 short descriptions.
Plot is exactly 700 words so that passes
WP:FILMPLOT .
Add a comma after "At the funeral".
"under water" → "underwater"
"for audition" → "for auditions"
"which explored this freedom" → "that explored this freedom"
"MGM agreed a reasonable" → "MGM agreed to a reasonable"
Is there a word missing between "agreeing the deal"?
Is the comma after "early 2008" necessary?
Can we change all uses of "..." to "[...]" for consistency?
Again, should "north east" be capitalized?
"by the producer" → "from the producer"
#Post-production feels kinda small. Can it be merged with another section?
Other than that, everything else looks good.
This section is
normally titled "Release".
"tag-line" → "tagline"
"pump action shotgun" → "pump-action shotgun"
Add a comma after "in the finished film".
"Warner Brothers, copyrighted 2001" sounds weird. Reword?
Try paraphrasing per
WP:RECEPTION .
That's about everything in this section.
"which are directly borrowed" → "that are directly borrowed"
The last sentence in the first paragraph in #Legacy needs a source.
This section needs the most work.
Sources from Blogspot and Discogs (#9, #10, #63) are not reliable.
YouTube uploads of certain scenes (#71, #72) are also not reliable.
WP:IMDB is prohibited from being used as a source (#73, #85, #123).
A check should be done to make sure each citation has an author/date/website listed.
Is the last source in #External_links (Clothes on Film) necessary?
Make sure to sort categories alphabetically.
Finally, archive sources (either manually or with
this tool ).
@
PatTheMoron : Hope you're doing well. Everything looks better now. However, the last sentence in #Legacy still needs a source. After adding one or replying, ping me and I'll pass the article.
Some Dude From North Carolina (
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12:38, 24 June 2021 (UTC)
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Done, @
Some Dude From North Carolina : !
PatTheMoron (
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06:45, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
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