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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 06:33, 14 September 2019 (UTC) reply


This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:

  • first sentence, suggest T21 was one of nine...
  • could you drop the 0 inches on the waterline length conversion?
  • the beam measurements don't match
  • which would propel the boats→which propelled the boats
  • any idea where the TTs were mounted?
  • In the Modifications section, if there was already a 3.7 cm gun superfiring over the main gun, how was the 2 cm gun also superfiring over it?
  • "Another mount had been fitted" another quad 2 cm mount?
  • "if this was actually carried out"
  • "Some ships did receive an additional"
  • suggest "10–12 and 13–15 October"→"10–15 October"

That's all I could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:14, 14 September 2019 (UTC) reply

Just a little bit of cleanup here ;-( Thanks for pointing them out to me so they won't make a reappearance.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 22:55, 14 September 2019 (UTC) reply
No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 02:55, 15 September 2019 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 06:33, 14 September 2019 (UTC) reply


This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:

  • first sentence, suggest T21 was one of nine...
  • could you drop the 0 inches on the waterline length conversion?
  • the beam measurements don't match
  • which would propel the boats→which propelled the boats
  • any idea where the TTs were mounted?
  • In the Modifications section, if there was already a 3.7 cm gun superfiring over the main gun, how was the 2 cm gun also superfiring over it?
  • "Another mount had been fitted" another quad 2 cm mount?
  • "if this was actually carried out"
  • "Some ships did receive an additional"
  • suggest "10–12 and 13–15 October"→"10–15 October"

That's all I could find. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:14, 14 September 2019 (UTC) reply

Just a little bit of cleanup here ;-( Thanks for pointing them out to me so they won't make a reappearance.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 22:55, 14 September 2019 (UTC) reply
No worries. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 02:55, 15 September 2019 (UTC) reply

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