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Reviewer: Parsecboy ( talk · contribs) 16:41, 2 March 2018 (UTC) reply

I'll take this one too. Parsecboy ( talk) 16:41, 2 March 2018 (UTC) reply

• One dupe link
• I don't think "breakout" can be used as a verb - I'd split it
• You might mention that the sortie in September 1941 was of the temporary Baltic Fleet, centered on Tirpitz

Nice work. Parsecboy ( talk) 13:25, 6 March 2018 (UTC) reply

• • Fixed these. I reworked the bit about the Baltic Fleet in Z27; if you like that phrasing, I'll copy it over to the others.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 18:34, 6 March 2018 (UTC) reply
    • Yeah, that looks good to me. Parsecboy ( talk) 21:04, 6 March 2018 (UTC) reply
      • Alright, I think everything is in order. Happy to promote. Parsecboy ( talk) 13:15, 8 March 2018 (UTC) reply