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Reviewer: Parsecboy ( talk · contribs) 19:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC) reply

I'll do this one too. Parsecboy ( talk) 19:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC) reply

• Images check out
• Looks like your Construction and career header needs to be adjusted a level higher
  • Oops.
• I think you need a comma after Schmidt in Anton Schmitt who was"
• You might specify that 24 September 1939 was a few weeks after the start of WWII. Parsecboy ( talk) 19:57, 9 March 2018 (UTC) reply
  • I did already in the lede. Is that not enough? Thanks for the quick turnaround.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 20:29, 9 March 2018 (UTC) reply
    • I tend to err on the side of repeating things in the intro and the body, on the assumption that not everyone will read both. Up to you, I guess. Parsecboy ( talk) 20:54, 9 March 2018 (UTC) reply
      • That's perfectly reasonable in a longer article, but this one's pretty short.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:57, 9 March 2018 (UTC) reply
        • Fair enough, I'll pass this now. Parsecboy ( talk) 21:58, 9 March 2018 (UTC) reply