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Reviewer: Jonas Vinther ( talk · contribs) 15:24, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
a. the prose is clear and concise, it respects copyright laws, and the spelling and grammar are correct
b. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation
1. Why write "1940/1" but write the two others as "1942–43" and "1942–45"? I'd suggest changing "1940/1" to "1940-41" so as to match the others.
2. "Sometime in 1941" - If it's unknown when in 1941 I'd suggest simply writing "In 1941".
3. "named after the commander of the torpedo boat SMS V-29 killed during the Battle of Jutland in 1916" - I'd suggest adding "that was" in between "SMS V-29" and "killed".
4. Instead of writing "6/7 January" and "28/29 September" I'd suggest writing "6-7 January" and "28-29 September" and this of course goes for every time "/" is used instead of "-".
a. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline
b. It provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines
c. It contains no original research
a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic
b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail
It represents viewpoints fairly and without bias, giving due weight to each
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute
a. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content
b. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions
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Reviewer: Jonas Vinther ( talk · contribs) 15:24, 12 October 2014 (UTC)
a. the prose is clear and concise, it respects copyright laws, and the spelling and grammar are correct
b. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation
1. Why write "1940/1" but write the two others as "1942–43" and "1942–45"? I'd suggest changing "1940/1" to "1940-41" so as to match the others.
2. "Sometime in 1941" - If it's unknown when in 1941 I'd suggest simply writing "In 1941".
3. "named after the commander of the torpedo boat SMS V-29 killed during the Battle of Jutland in 1916" - I'd suggest adding "that was" in between "SMS V-29" and "killed".
4. Instead of writing "6/7 January" and "28/29 September" I'd suggest writing "6-7 January" and "28-29 September" and this of course goes for every time "/" is used instead of "-".
a. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline
b. It provides in-line citations from reliable sources for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines
c. It contains no original research
a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic
b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail
It represents viewpoints fairly and without bias, giving due weight to each
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute
a. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content
b. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions