It's close, but no cigar. It needs some more references. It looks great otherwise. On hold for one week. ~
NerdyScienceDude (
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✐) 04:33, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
Per my knowladge, the editor can choose whether or not the lead should have refs. I would like to see it a bit longer, meaning the lead.
Buggie111 (
talk) 13:24, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
I've expanded the lead to 3 paraghraps and I'v addressed the issue of no refs in the lead per the MOS rules in
WP:LEAD. Hope that's the last issue :)--
White Shadowsyou're breaking up 14:29, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
First and fourth "mini" paragraph for Bergen need a ref.
Buggie111 (
talk) 14:35, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
Initial planing for many U-boat bunkers began in late 1940 and starting in 1941, the
Organisation Todt began the construction of bunkers in Bergen and Trondheim. The initial U-boat bunkers were completed between 1942 and 1943.
planing → planning
The Norwegians however put up a stiffer resistance to the invading German forces. Nonetheless, by May 1940 the southern half of Norway was under German control.
However needs to be removed since it's a word to avoid.
Following the
German invasion of France and the Low Countries, the Allies were forced to evacuated the Norwegian port of Narvik, leaving the country to the Germans who would occupy it until the end of the war.
evacuated → evacuate
I will pass once these issues are resolved. ~
NerdyScienceDude (
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✐) 23:05, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
Thanks Buggie. While that probably does not deserve co-nom credit, I'll give you a barnstar once NSD passes it.--
White Shadowsyou're breaking up 23:30, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
The first bullet point is still there and Buggie decided to do the opposite of that bullet point in a different section. ~
NerdyScienceDude (
✉ •
✐) 00:11, 16 May 2010 (UTC)reply
It's close, but no cigar. It needs some more references. It looks great otherwise. On hold for one week. ~
NerdyScienceDude (
✉ •
✐) 04:33, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
Per my knowladge, the editor can choose whether or not the lead should have refs. I would like to see it a bit longer, meaning the lead.
Buggie111 (
talk) 13:24, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
I've expanded the lead to 3 paraghraps and I'v addressed the issue of no refs in the lead per the MOS rules in
WP:LEAD. Hope that's the last issue :)--
White Shadowsyou're breaking up 14:29, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
First and fourth "mini" paragraph for Bergen need a ref.
Buggie111 (
talk) 14:35, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
Initial planing for many U-boat bunkers began in late 1940 and starting in 1941, the
Organisation Todt began the construction of bunkers in Bergen and Trondheim. The initial U-boat bunkers were completed between 1942 and 1943.
planing → planning
The Norwegians however put up a stiffer resistance to the invading German forces. Nonetheless, by May 1940 the southern half of Norway was under German control.
However needs to be removed since it's a word to avoid.
Following the
German invasion of France and the Low Countries, the Allies were forced to evacuated the Norwegian port of Narvik, leaving the country to the Germans who would occupy it until the end of the war.
evacuated → evacuate
I will pass once these issues are resolved. ~
NerdyScienceDude (
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✐) 23:05, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
Thanks Buggie. While that probably does not deserve co-nom credit, I'll give you a barnstar once NSD passes it.--
White Shadowsyou're breaking up 23:30, 15 May 2010 (UTC)reply
The first bullet point is still there and Buggie decided to do the opposite of that bullet point in a different section. ~
NerdyScienceDude (
✉ •
✐) 00:11, 16 May 2010 (UTC)reply