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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 18:06, 3 February 2017 (UTC) reply

I'll start this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 18:06, 3 February 2017 (UTC) reply

@ Sturmvogel 66: Whenever you are ready. -- KAVEBEAR ( talk) 05:41, 10 February 2017 (UTC) reply

@ Sturmvogel 66: Do you still plan on continuing this review?-- KAVEBEAR ( talk) 22:50, 22 February 2017 (UTC) reply

• Apologies
• No DABs, external links OK.
• The link to the source for the Queen Emma image is dead. Needs a PD-1923 tag rather than PD-old

• Fixed.

• Halfway there. Still need to fix the link to the Hawaiian archives.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 02:07, 23 February 2017 (UTC) reply

@ Sturmvogel 66: Done. The links merely migrated. New link: http://gallery.hawaii.gov/gallery2/main.php?g2_itemId=1862&g2_imageViewsIndex=1 -- KAVEBEAR ( talk) 02:10, 23 February 2017 (UTC) reply

I swear gov't website are the worst for link stability. Somebody new in authority always wants to make their mark with meaningless changes.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 02:18, 23 February 2017 (UTC) reply

• because of this association Suggest moving this sub-clause in the lede to the end of the sentence.

• Fixed.

• Is the Poʻohoʻolewaikala lineage significant enough to warrant an article and would it meet WP:GNG?

• No it is not not significant enough to warrant a separate article.

• Suggest redlinking the House of Nobles and Council of Chiefs

• Done.

• a Hawaiian resident superintendent of the leper settlement of Kalaupapa This is kinda confusing. Was he a Hawaiian who was the resident superintendent, or a Hawaiian resident was was the superintendant?

• Fixed.

• Short and sweet.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 01:07, 23 February 2017 (UTC) reply

@ Sturmvogel 66: Anything else?-- KAVEBEAR ( talk) 01:54, 23 February 2017 (UTC) reply