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The article does not meet the Good article criteria at the present time, and cannot be listed. The article suffers from poor organization, too many pictures, images, and tables, and not enough text. Although, contrary to that, the intro section is a bit too long-worded (paragraphs are too long), and doesn't exactly summarize the article. I also see numerous manual of style issues; 'see also' links are not at the top of sections, but rather scattered just about everywhere, and some sections have 4 & 5 'see also' links and very little content. There are some subsection headers that are internal wikilinks, also a MOS violation. The sources provided for some of the tables don't seem to follow any sort of pattern or consistent formatting.
The 'Historical geography and politics' is only cited by a single, answers.com reference. I find it rather humorous that the text in this reference that is cited, appears to be text that was copied by answers.com from the wikipedia article on
Saskatchewan, which is a circular reference and should be avoided (Wikipedia articles should not cite other wikipedia articles). There should also be more than a single source cited as well for this material, for more than one point of view.
The 'additional information' section is just a bulleted list of random items, most of which actually probably belong in other areas of this article, or in the Saskatchewan article.
The 'see also' section is also getting quite long. Links to articles that already appear in article text can be removed to help reduce this a bit.
Also, I am unable to find any evidence on this talk page or elsewhere that the League of Copyeditors did anything to this article, as the nominator suggested in the nomination. Usually, when articles are copyedited by the League, they leave a tag on the talk page indicated that the copyedit was done.
Sorry to be so blunt here, folks, but the article is a long way from GA status. Hope this points editors in the right direction. Cheers! Dr. Cash ( talk) 21:10, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
Does anyone want to work on rewording this sentence, found in the second paragraph of the 'Historical geography' sub-section: In 1870, the Hudson Bay's Company (HBC) had combined with the North West Company in 1821, and then ceded its rights from the Canadian government. I assume the 1870 refers to the 'ceded its rights' part, but then I'm not really sure what 'ceded its rights from the Canadian government' means. Isn't it supposed to be 'ceded its rights to the Canadian government'? Alexius Horatius 06:10, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
Replaced unreferenced additional info section with a see also link to Symbols of Saskatchewan which is cited. The weather additional info is here...;Weather
Put the lead paragraph of Geology of Saskatchewan into Geography of Saskatchewan as a section on geology, will try to enlarge the section with relation of geology to geography next. SriMesh | talk 04:01, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Geography of Saskatchewan's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
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I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 02:18, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
Wow, a whole page on the geography of Saskatchewan without using the word flat.
Clearly that's an oversight. 99.240.191.54 ( talk) 20:04, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
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This article is written in Canadian English, which has its own spelling conventions (colour, centre, travelled, realize, analyze) and some terms that are used in it may be different or absent from other varieties of English. According to the relevant style guide, this should not be changed without broad consensus. |
The article does not meet the Good article criteria at the present time, and cannot be listed. The article suffers from poor organization, too many pictures, images, and tables, and not enough text. Although, contrary to that, the intro section is a bit too long-worded (paragraphs are too long), and doesn't exactly summarize the article. I also see numerous manual of style issues; 'see also' links are not at the top of sections, but rather scattered just about everywhere, and some sections have 4 & 5 'see also' links and very little content. There are some subsection headers that are internal wikilinks, also a MOS violation. The sources provided for some of the tables don't seem to follow any sort of pattern or consistent formatting.
The 'Historical geography and politics' is only cited by a single, answers.com reference. I find it rather humorous that the text in this reference that is cited, appears to be text that was copied by answers.com from the wikipedia article on
Saskatchewan, which is a circular reference and should be avoided (Wikipedia articles should not cite other wikipedia articles). There should also be more than a single source cited as well for this material, for more than one point of view.
The 'additional information' section is just a bulleted list of random items, most of which actually probably belong in other areas of this article, or in the Saskatchewan article.
The 'see also' section is also getting quite long. Links to articles that already appear in article text can be removed to help reduce this a bit.
Also, I am unable to find any evidence on this talk page or elsewhere that the League of Copyeditors did anything to this article, as the nominator suggested in the nomination. Usually, when articles are copyedited by the League, they leave a tag on the talk page indicated that the copyedit was done.
Sorry to be so blunt here, folks, but the article is a long way from GA status. Hope this points editors in the right direction. Cheers! Dr. Cash ( talk) 21:10, 27 January 2008 (UTC)
Does anyone want to work on rewording this sentence, found in the second paragraph of the 'Historical geography' sub-section: In 1870, the Hudson Bay's Company (HBC) had combined with the North West Company in 1821, and then ceded its rights from the Canadian government. I assume the 1870 refers to the 'ceded its rights' part, but then I'm not really sure what 'ceded its rights from the Canadian government' means. Isn't it supposed to be 'ceded its rights to the Canadian government'? Alexius Horatius 06:10, 13 January 2009 (UTC)
Replaced unreferenced additional info section with a see also link to Symbols of Saskatchewan which is cited. The weather additional info is here...;Weather
Put the lead paragraph of Geology of Saskatchewan into Geography of Saskatchewan as a section on geology, will try to enlarge the section with relation of geology to geography next. SriMesh | talk 04:01, 25 January 2009 (UTC)
I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Geography of Saskatchewan's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
Reference named "Atlas of Saskatchewan":
{{
cite encyclopedia}}
: |access-date=
requires |url=
(
help); Unknown parameter |other=
ignored (|others=
suggested) (
help)
{{
cite encyclopedia}}
: |access-date=
requires |url=
(
help); Unknown parameter |other=
ignored (|others=
suggested) (
help)
Reference named "AtlasSK":
{{
cite book}}
: |access-date=
requires |url=
(
help); |edition=
has extra text (
help); Unknown parameter |editorn=
ignored (
help)
{{
cite book}}
: |access-date=
requires |url=
(
help); |edition=
has extra text (
help); Unknown parameter |encyclopedia=
ignored (
help)CS1 maint: multiple names: editors list (
link)
I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 02:18, 26 January 2009 (UTC)
Wow, a whole page on the geography of Saskatchewan without using the word flat.
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