"directed by Mohan Krishna Indraganti, who co-wrote the film with R. David Nathan" - might sound better if it was compacted: directed by Mohan Krishna Indraganti and co-written by R. David Nathan.
Done
"The story, written by Nathan" - no need, as Nathan is already mentioned in the lead's first sentence
Done
Three paragraphs in the Plot section begin with "Catherine". If you think it's best, I would at least recommend merging the third and fourth paragraphs together so that it improves the flow
Done As for Catherine's repetition, well,
queens makes more noise compared to
rooks.
"David stabs Jai fatally at a warehouse" - David fatally stabs Jai in a warehouse
Done
"According to Indraganti, the costumes, production design, and cinematography co-ordinated well" - try According to Indraganti, the costumes, production design, and cinematography were well-coordinated, resulting in the film being produced with an "interesting palette"
Done
"claiming it the biggest release for a Nani film up to that date." - it sounds like Nani directed the film or produced it. Try biggest release for a film starring Nani
Done
"Besides the United States, Gentleman was released in other overseas markets such as Africa, Germany, and Mauritius" - this could do with rephrasing as Mauritius is part of Africa technically
A special thanks to Wayback Machine and other Internet archiving websites.
Those were all of the minor prose nitpicks I could find, but other than that it's an excellent article once again! It is comprehensive, well sourced, and well written throughout. Will pass once all of the above are out of the way. JAGUAR11:57, 28 January 2017 (UTC)reply
"directed by Mohan Krishna Indraganti, who co-wrote the film with R. David Nathan" - might sound better if it was compacted: directed by Mohan Krishna Indraganti and co-written by R. David Nathan.
Done
"The story, written by Nathan" - no need, as Nathan is already mentioned in the lead's first sentence
Done
Three paragraphs in the Plot section begin with "Catherine". If you think it's best, I would at least recommend merging the third and fourth paragraphs together so that it improves the flow
Done As for Catherine's repetition, well,
queens makes more noise compared to
rooks.
"David stabs Jai fatally at a warehouse" - David fatally stabs Jai in a warehouse
Done
"According to Indraganti, the costumes, production design, and cinematography co-ordinated well" - try According to Indraganti, the costumes, production design, and cinematography were well-coordinated, resulting in the film being produced with an "interesting palette"
Done
"claiming it the biggest release for a Nani film up to that date." - it sounds like Nani directed the film or produced it. Try biggest release for a film starring Nani
Done
"Besides the United States, Gentleman was released in other overseas markets such as Africa, Germany, and Mauritius" - this could do with rephrasing as Mauritius is part of Africa technically
A special thanks to Wayback Machine and other Internet archiving websites.
Those were all of the minor prose nitpicks I could find, but other than that it's an excellent article once again! It is comprehensive, well sourced, and well written throughout. Will pass once all of the above are out of the way. JAGUAR11:57, 28 January 2017 (UTC)reply