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I'll base my explanation from this edit: 1
1. First and foremost, you saw that I rearranged the locations of the images. As far as I can see on many Wikipedia articles, images on the lead section is much avoided especially if the article has an infobox associated with. Furthermore, images are traditionally placed at every beginning of a new paragraph, rather than the central part of a paragraph, like you did in
GTDLNHS pediment.jpg.
2. I rewrote the lead section in the way like this:
“ | General Tiburcio de Leon National High School, also known as Gen. T. de Leon National High School or GTDNHS is a... | ” |
3. Third, even though you can't see it, some wordings of the history section, more concisely, the section headers, are supporting bias, and violates the
Wikipedia's neutrality rule. For example, the tone of the sentence "The present administration of Mrs. David has ushered dramatic changes in physical development, staff improvement, and pursuit of quality education." offers sort of bias. As much as possible, please
avoid] these kind of statements. Sad to say, I found not at least one of them in the article but too many.
4. Fourth, I tagged this template:
{{
unreferenced}}
to your article, you can't remove them unless you provided good and
reliable sources for the info. Written publications such as school paper or even the internet will do, but make sure you know how to
cite them.5. I formatted the curricular offerings section so that non-Filipino, or non-student of Gen. T. de Leon NHS readers will not be confused what that whole big box is all about. I hope you understand that there are lots of many foreign people looks at Wikipedia every seconds.
6. Finally, what caught my attention very well is this end remark:
“ | <!-- PLEASE *DO NOT* REMOVE THE ACHIEVEMENTS SECTION, WE'LL STILL ADD ADDITIONAL DETAILS LATER ON<br> AND PLEASE REMEMBER, EDIT RESPONSIBLY! DO NOT JUST EDIT IF YOU DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT EDITING IN WIKI! OR IF YOU HAVE ENOUGH WIKI EDITING<br> KNOWLEDGE, PLEASE BE SURE YOU HAVE ENOUGH KNOWLEDGE OF THIS ARTICLE!<br> DO NOT EDIT THE ARTICLE IF YOU DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT IT!<br> PLEASE BE CAREFUL EDITING THIS ARTICLE<br> -patrickjason91 (article creator)... --> | ” |
Here's my thoughts:
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That's all so far. I hope you understand what I said.-- JL 09 q?c 15:29, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
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I'll base my explanation from this edit: 1
1. First and foremost, you saw that I rearranged the locations of the images. As far as I can see on many Wikipedia articles, images on the lead section is much avoided especially if the article has an infobox associated with. Furthermore, images are traditionally placed at every beginning of a new paragraph, rather than the central part of a paragraph, like you did in
GTDLNHS pediment.jpg.
2. I rewrote the lead section in the way like this:
“ | General Tiburcio de Leon National High School, also known as Gen. T. de Leon National High School or GTDNHS is a... | ” |
3. Third, even though you can't see it, some wordings of the history section, more concisely, the section headers, are supporting bias, and violates the
Wikipedia's neutrality rule. For example, the tone of the sentence "The present administration of Mrs. David has ushered dramatic changes in physical development, staff improvement, and pursuit of quality education." offers sort of bias. As much as possible, please
avoid] these kind of statements. Sad to say, I found not at least one of them in the article but too many.
4. Fourth, I tagged this template:
{{
unreferenced}}
to your article, you can't remove them unless you provided good and
reliable sources for the info. Written publications such as school paper or even the internet will do, but make sure you know how to
cite them.5. I formatted the curricular offerings section so that non-Filipino, or non-student of Gen. T. de Leon NHS readers will not be confused what that whole big box is all about. I hope you understand that there are lots of many foreign people looks at Wikipedia every seconds.
6. Finally, what caught my attention very well is this end remark:
“ | <!-- PLEASE *DO NOT* REMOVE THE ACHIEVEMENTS SECTION, WE'LL STILL ADD ADDITIONAL DETAILS LATER ON<br> AND PLEASE REMEMBER, EDIT RESPONSIBLY! DO NOT JUST EDIT IF YOU DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT EDITING IN WIKI! OR IF YOU HAVE ENOUGH WIKI EDITING<br> KNOWLEDGE, PLEASE BE SURE YOU HAVE ENOUGH KNOWLEDGE OF THIS ARTICLE!<br> DO NOT EDIT THE ARTICLE IF YOU DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT IT!<br> PLEASE BE CAREFUL EDITING THIS ARTICLE<br> -patrickjason91 (article creator)... --> | ” |
Here's my thoughts:
“ | If you do not want your writing to be edited, used, and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here. All text that you did not write yourself, except brief excerpts, must be available under terms consistent with Wikipedia's Terms of Use before you submit it. | ” |
That's all so far. I hope you understand what I said.-- JL 09 q?c 15:29, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
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