Previously, it was a crude jetty used by the fishing community which was later renovated and used as a landing place for British governors and other prominent people - It was a crude jetty used by the fishing community which was later renovated and used as a landing place for British governors and other prominent people - redundancy
in the Apollo Bunder area in South Mumbai, - in the Apollo Bunder area, South Mumbai
the Viceroy, the Earl of Reading - the viceroy, the Earl of Reading
Done
The last British troops to leave India following India's independence - The last British troops to leave following India's independence - redundant
That sounds very important to the article. Hoe can it be redundant?
We are talking about India's independence so it'll be about India obviously. Repetition also sounds odd but if you say, what about: The last British troops to leave India following the country's independence? TheSpecialUserTSU02:27, 3 December 2012 (UTC)reply
of both Hindu and Muslim - of Hindu and Muslim - redundant
architectural styles, the arch is in Muslim style while the decorations are in Hindu style - architectural styles; the arch is of Muslim style while the decorations are of Hindu style
six hundred - 600
of the Gateway of India. - of the gateway.
completed in record time - what record was it? and record relatively to?
The Gateway of India, though built as a - Though built as a
Built right next to the imposing and prestigious Taj Mahal Palace & Tower hotel, - Built right next to the Taj Mahal Palace & Tower hotel,
for Britishers arriving for the first time to India, the gateway was a symbol of the power and majesty of the British empire. - for British arriving for the first time to India, the gateway was a symbol of the "power and majesty" of their empire.
of Maratha pride and courage. - of Maratha "pride and courage".
The Gateway of India itself is a major tourist destination and a popular gathering spot for locals, giant-balloon sellers and photographers.[19] - move this to the last para's first line as small paras are discouraged at GAs
The Gateway of India itself is a major tourist destination and a popular gathering spot for locals, giant-balloon sellers and photographers. - The Gateway of India is a major tourist destination and a popular gathering spot for locals, giant-balloon sellers and photographers.
Other routes from the Gateway include ferry rides to Alibaug and Mandwa. These ferries are said to carry passengers above their certified capacity due to their popularity. - Other routes from the Gateway include ferry rides to Alibaug and Mandwa; these ferries are said to carry passengers above their certified capacity due to their popularity.
From 2012 - In 2012
to Gateway - to gateway
The Gateway could host about 2,000 to 2,500 people, whereas, Elephanta Caves can only host about 700 to 800 peoples. - The Gateway can host 2,000 to 2,500 people, while, Elephanta Caves can host 700 to 800 peoples.
Previously, it was a crude jetty used by the fishing community which was later renovated and used as a landing place for British governors and other prominent people - It was a crude jetty used by the fishing community which was later renovated and used as a landing place for British governors and other prominent people - redundancy
in the Apollo Bunder area in South Mumbai, - in the Apollo Bunder area, South Mumbai
the Viceroy, the Earl of Reading - the viceroy, the Earl of Reading
Done
The last British troops to leave India following India's independence - The last British troops to leave following India's independence - redundant
That sounds very important to the article. Hoe can it be redundant?
We are talking about India's independence so it'll be about India obviously. Repetition also sounds odd but if you say, what about: The last British troops to leave India following the country's independence? TheSpecialUserTSU02:27, 3 December 2012 (UTC)reply
of both Hindu and Muslim - of Hindu and Muslim - redundant
architectural styles, the arch is in Muslim style while the decorations are in Hindu style - architectural styles; the arch is of Muslim style while the decorations are of Hindu style
six hundred - 600
of the Gateway of India. - of the gateway.
completed in record time - what record was it? and record relatively to?
The Gateway of India, though built as a - Though built as a
Built right next to the imposing and prestigious Taj Mahal Palace & Tower hotel, - Built right next to the Taj Mahal Palace & Tower hotel,
for Britishers arriving for the first time to India, the gateway was a symbol of the power and majesty of the British empire. - for British arriving for the first time to India, the gateway was a symbol of the "power and majesty" of their empire.
of Maratha pride and courage. - of Maratha "pride and courage".
The Gateway of India itself is a major tourist destination and a popular gathering spot for locals, giant-balloon sellers and photographers.[19] - move this to the last para's first line as small paras are discouraged at GAs
The Gateway of India itself is a major tourist destination and a popular gathering spot for locals, giant-balloon sellers and photographers. - The Gateway of India is a major tourist destination and a popular gathering spot for locals, giant-balloon sellers and photographers.
Other routes from the Gateway include ferry rides to Alibaug and Mandwa. These ferries are said to carry passengers above their certified capacity due to their popularity. - Other routes from the Gateway include ferry rides to Alibaug and Mandwa; these ferries are said to carry passengers above their certified capacity due to their popularity.
From 2012 - In 2012
to Gateway - to gateway
The Gateway could host about 2,000 to 2,500 people, whereas, Elephanta Caves can only host about 700 to 800 peoples. - The Gateway can host 2,000 to 2,500 people, while, Elephanta Caves can host 700 to 800 peoples.