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do you want driver and 3 years experience 0544750710 92.96.210.119 ( talk) 15:49, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
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Hi I have a conflict of interest and on behalf of G42 would like to request the following changes be made to this article to update and improve the content.
Firstly, the article should be renamed to G42 (company). The name Group 42 was previously used but G42 is the modern name used to describe the company in all press and subsidiary names. I can submit a page move request as well if that is sensible but it seemed logical to request this as part of my wider request seeing as there is also a need to replace the mentions of Group 42 in the rest of the article with "G42".
Secondly, the article is missing a lot of the enterprises and joint ventures, which has made other information outdated as well. The article needs considerable expansion, but as a start, can the introduction and Corporate history section be updated (replacing the existing text of these sections) to read as follows?:
Can the Infobox also be updated as follows:
Areas served: Middle East and Africa, Central Asia, Europe and the US
Number of employees: 20,000 (source if needed https://businesschief.eu/leadership-and-strategy/abu-dhabi-health-tech-company-m42-now-biggest-in-region)
"Subsidiaries" changed to "Portfolio companies" for accuracy and including the following:
I have wording and sources to provide proper subsections on these but for now it would be good to have them visible at a glance.
Finally, the "Partnership" section is also very out of date. For now, I suggest renaming it and splitting it into two separate sections, "Portfolio companies" containing Bayanat from the existing list, and "Partnerships and initiatives", containing Adalytyx, BGI Group, Rafael and IAI, and ToTok. Nanoscent and Alibaba Cloud can be removed as they were respectively a short-term collaboration and a small event from 2019 and not relevant for this article. Again, I have suggestions for expanding these lists but as a start having these in two separate, alphabetical lists would be easier for a reader to navigate.
Many thanks for your help in advance! Oddoso ( talk) 16:40, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
M42 and G42 Healthcare
In 2023, G42 launched M42, a tech-enabled healthcare company, with sovereign investor Mubadala Investment Company.
M42 manages a portfolio of healthcare assets including Diaverum, Cleveland Clinic, Amana Healthcare, Biogenix Labs and Moorfields Eye Hospital Abu Dhabi. The Group CEO and managing director is Hasan Jasem Al Nowais. https://www.arabianbusiness.com/industries/healthcare/abu-dhabis-g42-and-mubadala-combine-healthcare-assets-to-form-m42 https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2023-04-18/mubadala-backed-firm-to-buy-bridgepoint-dialysis-chain-diaverum
Through M42, G42 operates G42 Healthcare which has entered into various partnerships with entities in the health sector including:
AIQ
In 2020 G42 formed a joint venture with Abu Dhabi National Oil Company (ADNOC) to build AI products for the oil and gas industry. G42 owns 40% of the company and ADNOC owns 60%. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/adnoc-and-group-42-form-joint-venture-to-develop-ai-products-for-oil-and-gas-industry-1.1089952
On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.[10][11][12] Following Bayanat’s 2022 IPO, G42 owns a 77% stake in Bayanat. https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2022-10-31/silver-lake-backed-abu-dhabi-ai-firm-bayanat-quadruples-on-debut
G42 Cloud
A provider of cloud services and solutions for the public and private sectors.
Hayat Biotech
Hayat Biotech was formed as a joint venture between G42 and Sinopharm for the life sciences industry. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/2022/07/12/ad-ports-to-support-hayat-biotechs-international-expansion-under-new-deal/ In 2021 Hayat Biotech produced and distributed the Sinopharm Covid-19 vaccine in the UAE. https://gulfbusiness.com/uae-approves-new-sinopharm-vaccine-to-be-used-as-booster-jabs/ In 2022 Hayat Biotech signed an agreement with AD Ports Group for distribution and expansion. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/2022/07/12/ad-ports-to-support-hayat-biotechs-international-expansion-under-new-deal/
Injazat
Injazat was part of Mubadala’s ICT portfolio before in was acquired by G42 in 2020. As part of the deal Mubadala acquired a stake in G42. During the Covid-19 pandemic Injazat’s MICloud project migrated Mubadala’s IT services and online servers into the cloud. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/technology/abu-dhabi-s-injazat-aims-to-become-1bn-company-within-five-years-1.1227347
Khazna
In 2022 G42 and e& merged their data center services under Khazna Data Centers. The merger created the largest data center provider in the UAE and Middle East. https://gulfnews.com/business/e-g42-officially-consolidate-data-centers-under-khazna-1.88402460 https://w.media/uae-e-and-g42-merge-data-centre-services-under-khazna-data-centres/
Presight
A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder. https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2023-03-27/presight-ai-soars-176-in-abu-dhabi-debut-after-496-million-ipo?leadSource=uverify%20wall&sref=fXnwrRJZ https://gulfbusiness.com/g42-groups-presight-ai-gets-496m-in-ipo/
Oddoso ( talk) 15:27, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
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Oddoso ( talk) 15:27, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
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In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the G42 article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:
In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such as yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. |
Kindly submit your new edit request below at your earliest convenience, taking care to ensure that it makes use of CS1. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo 02:53, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
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@ Spintendo Thank you for you guidance on how to post the corrections without violating WP:REDACT, I have chosen to act on the following line from your guidance on my Talk page: "As an alternative, a new edit request displaying the correct use of ref notes could also have been posted after my reply". Hopefully the below meets that criteria of correct ref notes. To reinclude a deleted note, citation 20 does not like that the URL is missing a TLD, but that is the URL address.
M42 and G42 Healthcare
In 2023, G42 launched M42, a tech-enabled healthcare company, with sovereign investor Mubadala Investment Company.
M42 manages a portfolio of healthcare assets including Diaverum, Cleveland Clinic, Amana Healthcare, Biogenix Labs and Moorfields Eye Hospital Abu Dhabi. The Group CEO and managing director is Hasan Jasem Al Nowais. [1] [2]
Through M42, G42 operates G42 Healthcare which has entered into various partnerships with entities in the health sector including:
AIQ
In 2020 G42 formed a joint venture with Abu Dhabi National Oil Company (ADNOC) to build AI products for the oil and gas industry. G42 owns 40% of the company and ADNOC owns 60%. [9]
On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.[10][11][12] Following Bayanat’s 2022 IPO, G42 owns a 77% stake in Bayanat. [10]
G42 Cloud
A provider of cloud services and solutions for the public and private sectors.
Hayat Biotech
Hayat Biotech was formed as a joint venture between G42 and Sinopharm for the life sciences industry. [15] In 2021 Hayat Biotech produced and distributed the Sinopharm Covid-19 vaccine in the UAE. [16] In 2022 Hayat Biotech signed an agreement with AD Ports Group for distribution and expansion. [17]
Injazat
Injazat was part of Mubadala’s ICT portfolio before in was acquired by G42 in 2020. As part of the deal Mubadala acquired a stake in G42. During the Covid-19 pandemic Injazat’s MICloud project migrated Mubadala’s IT services and online servers into the cloud. [18]
Khazna
In 2022 G42 and e& merged their data center services under Khazna Data Centers. The merger created the largest data center provider in the UAE and Middle East. [19] [20]
Presight
A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder. [21] [22]
Oddoso ( talk) 14:27, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
Oddoso ( talk) 14:27, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
References
Unable to review. Several issues remain with this request.
"A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder.[21][22]".) As you can see, ref notes 21 and 22 are presented as the source verification for this claim. If both references equally confirm the information, then only one should be provided. (See WP:TOOMANYREFS.)
"On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.[10][11][12] ".) Ref notes 10, 11, and 12 appear later in the requested text, but the COI editor is reminded that all instances of ref notes must be activated. Otherwise, the proposed text cannot be implemented. In the example just shown, there is nothing to confirm that the inactivated numbers 10, 11 and 12 are the same references indicated under the activated ref notes 10, 11 and 12 other than the fact that the numbers are the same. (See WP:MINDREADER.) Several examples of these inactivated ref notes remain in the requested text. These must be activated or removed from the requested text and placed in a new edit request posted below this reply post.
Regards, Spintendo 21:05, 1 October 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. The reviewer would like to request the editor with a COI attempt to discuss with editors engaged in the subject-area first. |
@ Spintendo Please see an updated version of the request below with your most recent feedback taken into account. These changes include updates to company structure so please disregard the previous requests and feel free to archive them if you don’t need access to the previous discussions.
I have streamlined instances with two citations as requested in point 1 wherever the second source does not confirm something missing from the first.
I have included wikilinks wherever possible (point 2), but some entries do not have separate articles. I have redlinked these in the meantime if it helps, but while all of these instances have supporting citations, at the moment I believe most editors would consider these to be more appropriate for merging into this article rather than creating stubs. This could change down the line, of course.
On point 3 I have included the references from the existing page – I did not include these for review because I figured it was simpler for you to only have to consider new additions, but I take your point on numbers changing. These existing citations have a superscript note to distinguish them.
@ User:STEMinfo I have removed the information that was supported by the sources you identified as press releases (both Zawya.com) from the request. Thank you for your helpful feedback and the note you added for the w.media citation.
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Request: 1. In the Infobox, can Subsidiaries be updated to list the following:
2. In the introduction can the following changes be made as the aviation and hospitality are no longer applicable sectors. I have also included textual evidence in the appropriate section on how the portfolio company Bayanat works on smart cities, smart mobility and geospatial intelligence, but please see the following references which confirm this involvement: [1], [2]
3. Under Corporate history can fundamental AI be changed to applied AI and the reference to IIAI be removed as this has now changed name (it is now referred to as Inception and part of Core42 ) and it is not the only subsidiary involved.
4. (note all new content except Bayanat)
In 2023, G42 launched M42, a tech-enabled healthcare company, with sovereign investor Mubadala Investment Company. M42 manages a portfolio of healthcare assets including Diaverum, [3] Cleveland Clinic, Amana Healthcare, Biogenix Labs and Moorfields Eye Hospital Abu Dhabi. The Group CEO and managing director is Hasan Jasem Al Nowais. [4] Through M42, G42 operates G42 Healthcare which has entered into various partnerships with entities in the health sector including:
AIQ In 2020 G42 formed a joint venture with Abu Dhabi National Oil Company (ADNOC) to build AI products for the oil and gas industry. G42 owns 40% of the company and ADNOC owns 60%. [10] On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.
Core 42 Core42 was formed in October 2023 when G42 merged 3 of its entities, G42 Cloud, Injazat and Inception. [17] Through G42 Cloud, a provider of cloud services for the public and private sectors, G42 has partnerships with GBM, [18] IBM, [19] Nvidia, [20] Cerebras Systems, [21] and SAP. [22] Injazat was part of Mubadala’s ICT portfolio before in was acquired by G42 in 2020. As part of the deal Mubadala acquired a stake in G42. During the Covid-19 pandemic Injazat's MICloud project migrated Mubadala’s IT services and online servers into the cloud. [23] Injazat successfully developed Malaffi, the region's first Health Information Exchange system. [24] Inception is a research and development subsidiary focused on AI. In August 2023 G42 released an Arabic language large language model called Jais, in collaboration with Cerebras Systems and Mohamed bin Zayed University of Artificial Intelligence. [25] Hayat Biotech Hayat Biotech was formed as a joint venture between G42 and Sinopharm for the life sciences industry. [26] In 2021 Hayat Biotech produced and distributed the Sinopharm Covid-19 vaccine in the UAE. [27] In 2022 Hayat Biotech signed an agreement with AD Ports Group for distribution and expansion. [28] Khazna In 2022 G42 and e& merged their data center services under Khazna Data Centers. The merger created the largest data center provider in the UAE and Middle East. [29] Presight A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder. [30]
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Thanks again - I appreciate the time taken to properly assess these additions and amendments. Oddoso ( talk) 15:44, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
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I have streamlined instances with two citations as requested in point 1 wherever the second source does not confirm something missing from the first.
This makes it sound as if instances existed where two references were provided with neither of them verifying a particular claim.
[a] If that were the case, then definitely they should be removed, but it's important to note that if a reference verifies only a fragment of a sentence — maybe the first half of a sentence— it should be placed at the end of where that information is mentioned in the sentence, after any commas, but before any terminating punctuation. While the Sun is very warm and very large,
[1] it is still very far away from the Earth.
[2]
In the red text above, there are two references. Together, they each reference something that the other lacks. But they can't be placed together at the end of the sentence. They need to be placed so that one speaks about the Sun's size and its temperature while the other only speaks about its distance. Both are kept in one sentence, but they're placed precisely where they belong so that it's clear which one covers which part specifically. I just want to make sure that's clear with this request.
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Regards, Spintendo 18:17, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
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do you want driver and 3 years experience 0544750710 92.96.210.119 ( talk) 15:49, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hi I have a conflict of interest and on behalf of G42 would like to request the following changes be made to this article to update and improve the content.
Firstly, the article should be renamed to G42 (company). The name Group 42 was previously used but G42 is the modern name used to describe the company in all press and subsidiary names. I can submit a page move request as well if that is sensible but it seemed logical to request this as part of my wider request seeing as there is also a need to replace the mentions of Group 42 in the rest of the article with "G42".
Secondly, the article is missing a lot of the enterprises and joint ventures, which has made other information outdated as well. The article needs considerable expansion, but as a start, can the introduction and Corporate history section be updated (replacing the existing text of these sections) to read as follows?:
Can the Infobox also be updated as follows:
Areas served: Middle East and Africa, Central Asia, Europe and the US
Number of employees: 20,000 (source if needed https://businesschief.eu/leadership-and-strategy/abu-dhabi-health-tech-company-m42-now-biggest-in-region)
"Subsidiaries" changed to "Portfolio companies" for accuracy and including the following:
I have wording and sources to provide proper subsections on these but for now it would be good to have them visible at a glance.
Finally, the "Partnership" section is also very out of date. For now, I suggest renaming it and splitting it into two separate sections, "Portfolio companies" containing Bayanat from the existing list, and "Partnerships and initiatives", containing Adalytyx, BGI Group, Rafael and IAI, and ToTok. Nanoscent and Alibaba Cloud can be removed as they were respectively a short-term collaboration and a small event from 2019 and not relevant for this article. Again, I have suggestions for expanding these lists but as a start having these in two separate, alphabetical lists would be easier for a reader to navigate.
Many thanks for your help in advance! Oddoso ( talk) 16:40, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
M42 and G42 Healthcare
In 2023, G42 launched M42, a tech-enabled healthcare company, with sovereign investor Mubadala Investment Company.
M42 manages a portfolio of healthcare assets including Diaverum, Cleveland Clinic, Amana Healthcare, Biogenix Labs and Moorfields Eye Hospital Abu Dhabi. The Group CEO and managing director is Hasan Jasem Al Nowais. https://www.arabianbusiness.com/industries/healthcare/abu-dhabis-g42-and-mubadala-combine-healthcare-assets-to-form-m42 https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2023-04-18/mubadala-backed-firm-to-buy-bridgepoint-dialysis-chain-diaverum
Through M42, G42 operates G42 Healthcare which has entered into various partnerships with entities in the health sector including:
AIQ
In 2020 G42 formed a joint venture with Abu Dhabi National Oil Company (ADNOC) to build AI products for the oil and gas industry. G42 owns 40% of the company and ADNOC owns 60%. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/adnoc-and-group-42-form-joint-venture-to-develop-ai-products-for-oil-and-gas-industry-1.1089952
On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.[10][11][12] Following Bayanat’s 2022 IPO, G42 owns a 77% stake in Bayanat. https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2022-10-31/silver-lake-backed-abu-dhabi-ai-firm-bayanat-quadruples-on-debut
G42 Cloud
A provider of cloud services and solutions for the public and private sectors.
Hayat Biotech
Hayat Biotech was formed as a joint venture between G42 and Sinopharm for the life sciences industry. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/2022/07/12/ad-ports-to-support-hayat-biotechs-international-expansion-under-new-deal/ In 2021 Hayat Biotech produced and distributed the Sinopharm Covid-19 vaccine in the UAE. https://gulfbusiness.com/uae-approves-new-sinopharm-vaccine-to-be-used-as-booster-jabs/ In 2022 Hayat Biotech signed an agreement with AD Ports Group for distribution and expansion. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/2022/07/12/ad-ports-to-support-hayat-biotechs-international-expansion-under-new-deal/
Injazat
Injazat was part of Mubadala’s ICT portfolio before in was acquired by G42 in 2020. As part of the deal Mubadala acquired a stake in G42. During the Covid-19 pandemic Injazat’s MICloud project migrated Mubadala’s IT services and online servers into the cloud. https://www.thenationalnews.com/business/technology/abu-dhabi-s-injazat-aims-to-become-1bn-company-within-five-years-1.1227347
Khazna
In 2022 G42 and e& merged their data center services under Khazna Data Centers. The merger created the largest data center provider in the UAE and Middle East. https://gulfnews.com/business/e-g42-officially-consolidate-data-centers-under-khazna-1.88402460 https://w.media/uae-e-and-g42-merge-data-centre-services-under-khazna-data-centres/
Presight
A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder. https://www.bloomberg.com/news/articles/2023-03-27/presight-ai-soars-176-in-abu-dhabi-debut-after-496-million-ipo?leadSource=uverify%20wall&sref=fXnwrRJZ https://gulfbusiness.com/g42-groups-presight-ai-gets-496m-in-ipo/
Oddoso ( talk) 15:27, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Oddoso ( talk) 15:27, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
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In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the G42 article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text should resemble the following:
In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As Wikipedia is a volunteer project, edit requests such as yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. |
Kindly submit your new edit request below at your earliest convenience, taking care to ensure that it makes use of CS1. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo 02:53, 29 August 2023 (UTC)
Notes
References
Guideline: It is normal practice to defer to the style used by the first major contributor or adopted by the consensus of editors already working on the page, unless a change in consensus has been achieved. If the article you are editing is already using a particular citation style, you should follow it.
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Please see the reply posted below for more information. |
@ Spintendo Thank you for you guidance on how to post the corrections without violating WP:REDACT, I have chosen to act on the following line from your guidance on my Talk page: "As an alternative, a new edit request displaying the correct use of ref notes could also have been posted after my reply". Hopefully the below meets that criteria of correct ref notes. To reinclude a deleted note, citation 20 does not like that the URL is missing a TLD, but that is the URL address.
M42 and G42 Healthcare
In 2023, G42 launched M42, a tech-enabled healthcare company, with sovereign investor Mubadala Investment Company.
M42 manages a portfolio of healthcare assets including Diaverum, Cleveland Clinic, Amana Healthcare, Biogenix Labs and Moorfields Eye Hospital Abu Dhabi. The Group CEO and managing director is Hasan Jasem Al Nowais. [1] [2]
Through M42, G42 operates G42 Healthcare which has entered into various partnerships with entities in the health sector including:
AIQ
In 2020 G42 formed a joint venture with Abu Dhabi National Oil Company (ADNOC) to build AI products for the oil and gas industry. G42 owns 40% of the company and ADNOC owns 60%. [9]
On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.[10][11][12] Following Bayanat’s 2022 IPO, G42 owns a 77% stake in Bayanat. [10]
G42 Cloud
A provider of cloud services and solutions for the public and private sectors.
Hayat Biotech
Hayat Biotech was formed as a joint venture between G42 and Sinopharm for the life sciences industry. [15] In 2021 Hayat Biotech produced and distributed the Sinopharm Covid-19 vaccine in the UAE. [16] In 2022 Hayat Biotech signed an agreement with AD Ports Group for distribution and expansion. [17]
Injazat
Injazat was part of Mubadala’s ICT portfolio before in was acquired by G42 in 2020. As part of the deal Mubadala acquired a stake in G42. During the Covid-19 pandemic Injazat’s MICloud project migrated Mubadala’s IT services and online servers into the cloud. [18]
Khazna
In 2022 G42 and e& merged their data center services under Khazna Data Centers. The merger created the largest data center provider in the UAE and Middle East. [19] [20]
Presight
A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder. [21] [22]
Oddoso ( talk) 14:27, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
Oddoso ( talk) 14:27, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
References
Unable to review. Several issues remain with this request.
"A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder.[21][22]".) As you can see, ref notes 21 and 22 are presented as the source verification for this claim. If both references equally confirm the information, then only one should be provided. (See WP:TOOMANYREFS.)
"On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.[10][11][12] ".) Ref notes 10, 11, and 12 appear later in the requested text, but the COI editor is reminded that all instances of ref notes must be activated. Otherwise, the proposed text cannot be implemented. In the example just shown, there is nothing to confirm that the inactivated numbers 10, 11 and 12 are the same references indicated under the activated ref notes 10, 11 and 12 other than the fact that the numbers are the same. (See WP:MINDREADER.) Several examples of these inactivated ref notes remain in the requested text. These must be activated or removed from the requested text and placed in a new edit request posted below this reply post.
Regards, Spintendo 21:05, 1 October 2023 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. The reviewer would like to request the editor with a COI attempt to discuss with editors engaged in the subject-area first. |
@ Spintendo Please see an updated version of the request below with your most recent feedback taken into account. These changes include updates to company structure so please disregard the previous requests and feel free to archive them if you don’t need access to the previous discussions.
I have streamlined instances with two citations as requested in point 1 wherever the second source does not confirm something missing from the first.
I have included wikilinks wherever possible (point 2), but some entries do not have separate articles. I have redlinked these in the meantime if it helps, but while all of these instances have supporting citations, at the moment I believe most editors would consider these to be more appropriate for merging into this article rather than creating stubs. This could change down the line, of course.
On point 3 I have included the references from the existing page – I did not include these for review because I figured it was simpler for you to only have to consider new additions, but I take your point on numbers changing. These existing citations have a superscript note to distinguish them.
@ User:STEMinfo I have removed the information that was supported by the sources you identified as press releases (both Zawya.com) from the request. Thank you for your helpful feedback and the note you added for the w.media citation.
Extended content
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Request: 1. In the Infobox, can Subsidiaries be updated to list the following:
2. In the introduction can the following changes be made as the aviation and hospitality are no longer applicable sectors. I have also included textual evidence in the appropriate section on how the portfolio company Bayanat works on smart cities, smart mobility and geospatial intelligence, but please see the following references which confirm this involvement: [1], [2]
3. Under Corporate history can fundamental AI be changed to applied AI and the reference to IIAI be removed as this has now changed name (it is now referred to as Inception and part of Core42 ) and it is not the only subsidiary involved.
4. (note all new content except Bayanat)
In 2023, G42 launched M42, a tech-enabled healthcare company, with sovereign investor Mubadala Investment Company. M42 manages a portfolio of healthcare assets including Diaverum, [3] Cleveland Clinic, Amana Healthcare, Biogenix Labs and Moorfields Eye Hospital Abu Dhabi. The Group CEO and managing director is Hasan Jasem Al Nowais. [4] Through M42, G42 operates G42 Healthcare which has entered into various partnerships with entities in the health sector including:
AIQ In 2020 G42 formed a joint venture with Abu Dhabi National Oil Company (ADNOC) to build AI products for the oil and gas industry. G42 owns 40% of the company and ADNOC owns 60%. [10] On 14 January 2020, G42 announced the acquisition of Bayanat for Mapping and Surveying Services LLC, an end-to-end and custom provider of geospatial data products and services.
Core 42 Core42 was formed in October 2023 when G42 merged 3 of its entities, G42 Cloud, Injazat and Inception. [17] Through G42 Cloud, a provider of cloud services for the public and private sectors, G42 has partnerships with GBM, [18] IBM, [19] Nvidia, [20] Cerebras Systems, [21] and SAP. [22] Injazat was part of Mubadala’s ICT portfolio before in was acquired by G42 in 2020. As part of the deal Mubadala acquired a stake in G42. During the Covid-19 pandemic Injazat's MICloud project migrated Mubadala’s IT services and online servers into the cloud. [23] Injazat successfully developed Malaffi, the region's first Health Information Exchange system. [24] Inception is a research and development subsidiary focused on AI. In August 2023 G42 released an Arabic language large language model called Jais, in collaboration with Cerebras Systems and Mohamed bin Zayed University of Artificial Intelligence. [25] Hayat Biotech Hayat Biotech was formed as a joint venture between G42 and Sinopharm for the life sciences industry. [26] In 2021 Hayat Biotech produced and distributed the Sinopharm Covid-19 vaccine in the UAE. [27] In 2022 Hayat Biotech signed an agreement with AD Ports Group for distribution and expansion. [28] Khazna In 2022 G42 and e& merged their data center services under Khazna Data Centers. The merger created the largest data center provider in the UAE and Middle East. [29] Presight A provider of big data analytics solutions, powered by AI, Presight made its IPO in 2023 with G42 as a majority shareholder. [30]
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Thanks again - I appreciate the time taken to properly assess these additions and amendments. Oddoso ( talk) 15:44, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
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I have streamlined instances with two citations as requested in point 1 wherever the second source does not confirm something missing from the first.
This makes it sound as if instances existed where two references were provided with neither of them verifying a particular claim.
[a] If that were the case, then definitely they should be removed, but it's important to note that if a reference verifies only a fragment of a sentence — maybe the first half of a sentence— it should be placed at the end of where that information is mentioned in the sentence, after any commas, but before any terminating punctuation. While the Sun is very warm and very large,
[1] it is still very far away from the Earth.
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In the red text above, there are two references. Together, they each reference something that the other lacks. But they can't be placed together at the end of the sentence. They need to be placed so that one speaks about the Sun's size and its temperature while the other only speaks about its distance. Both are kept in one sentence, but they're placed precisely where they belong so that it's clear which one covers which part specifically. I just want to make sure that's clear with this request.
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Regards, Spintendo 18:17, 27 October 2023 (UTC)