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06:39, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
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I will get on with this one now! --
K. Peake
06:39, 24 September 2022 (UTC)
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Infobox and lead
- Infobox looks good!
"who also wrote it with" → "who also served as co-writers with" to avoid overusage of it
"It was released it as a" → "It was released as a" but shouldn't the initial Greek release be mentioned here too?
"its lyrics addressing" → "the lyrics addressing"
Where is the nation's best result part sourced?
Shouldn't it be "positive" or "generally positive" since there is not enough reviews to support universal acclaim?
Instead of adding the word Spanish before the organization's name, add afterwards that the certification was in Spain
"and first uploaded to the Panik's" → "and first uploaded to Panik's"
Background and composition
Shouldn't the Greece release be mentioned before the various countries since that was initial?
Where is the English language part sourced?
"have inside them."" → "have inside them"." per
MOS:QUOTE
"and strength, with an" → "and strength[, with] an" per paraphrasing of the quote
"love and more."" → "love and more"."
Reception
Start a new para for the commercial reception
"on record charts, after its" → "on record charts after its"
Promotion and other usage
"Malta, Netherlands, Sweden" → "Malta, the Netherlands, Sweden"
The Fama A Bailar and Los40 Music Awards performances are not sourced
Mention at the start of the several artists sentence something like them all being Eurovision contestants for relevancy
Lowercase the Black Mamba per
MOS:THEMUSIC
"of the reality talent show of" → "of the reality talent show"
At Eurovision Song Contest
Before Lisbon
"Prior to that," → "Prior to this,"
"Eleni Foureira with the song "Fuego" was" → "Foureira with "Fuego" was"
"in Lisbon, saying "I would" → "in Lisbon, saying: "I would"
"all of these years"." → "all of these years."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
In Lisbon
- Img looks good!
"the top ten countries from" → "the top 10 countries from" per
MOS:NUM
- What is the usage of [54] exactly?
- I moved it to the relevant position.
Iaof2017 (
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11:34, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
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Should it be created by lasers instead of laser lights?
"[...] and a cross" → "[and] a cross" per the actual paraphrasing
Italicise HuffPost
Remove pipe on Billboard and only use the surname Adams per him already having been introduced
"Steve Holden described it" → "Steve Holden described the performance as"
"and labelled it a" → "and labelled the act a"
"elaborated that "given the" → "elaborated, "Given the"
"some red-hot dance moves"." → "some red-hot dance moves."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
Track listing
Charts
Weekly charts
I don't think the Spanish Airplay and Swedish Heatseekers charts should be included when the main ones are for those countries
Year-end charts
Certifications
Release history
See also
References
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Copyvio score looks quite good at 28.1%!!
Wikilink
Wiwibloggs on ref 4 instead of ref 53
Shouldn't you only cite BBC for ref 7 since the name changed years ago?
Cite Billboard as work/website on ref 8
Cite Metro as work/website instead on ref 9 and pipe to
Metro (British newspaper)
Shouldn't the publisher just be IFPI Greece on ref 12 since I never see the full IFPI name used for it?
WP:OVERLINK of YouTube on ref 20
Ref 23 needs a work/publisher, also can Coca-Cola Bottling Shqipëria really be an author when it is a copmpany?
I am not sure about ref 41 per
WP:RSSM
Remove or replace ref 60 per
WP:RSP
Cite HuffPost as work/website instead on ref 61
Ditto for The National Herald on ref 62
Pipe Plötutíóindi to
Music of Iceland on ref 73
WP:OVERLINK of Apple Music on ref 75
Final comments and verdict
- Hi
Kyle Peake hope you're good. I've responded to all of your concerns.
Iaof2017 (
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11:41, 25 September 2022 (UTC)
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