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Reviewer: I'ma editor2022 ( talk · contribs) 22:45, 29 January 2022 (UTC)
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Hello, I just wanted to introduce myself and let you know I am glad to be reviewing the article
Friendship Is Magic (My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic) in which you've been a major contributor, and has been nominated for
GA-status according to the
criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to
contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. | Remember, Imurmate ( talk) 22:45, 29 January 2022 (UTC) |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
None. | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
None. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
None. | |
2c. it contains no original research. |
None. | |
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. |
None. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
None. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
None. | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
None. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. |
None. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
None. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. |
None. | |
7. Overall assessment. |
Well done, this article is ready to go for GA status. This article seems like it is almost compliant, although I would recommend to do the Plot section in table format ( like this article, however the Plot section is organized into 2 "Part"s so it seems like there is no need for it. |
[u]sing consistent formatting ... is not required(emphasis in original). Anyways, it is completely fine to use both the short and the long method, from my experience. Changing the citation style would violate WP:CITEVAR. I'd hate to bring up WP:OTHERSTUFF, but many featured articles, such as The Empire Strikes Back, use this without any problem. And re your comment about putting the plot summaries in tables, per MOS:TVPLOT, the summaries need to be prose. Pamzeis ( talk) 02:44, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
For main series articles, plot summaries ... should ideally be presented in a table using {{ Episode table}} and {{ Episode list}}.(emphasis mine) Unless I'm missing something important, this is not a main series article. OK, wait lemme calm down...So here's the relevant part:
Episode articles should have a prose plot summary of no more than 400 words.(emphasis in original) OK, now that we're (hopefully) on the same page with which part of MOS:TVPLOT we're talking about, let's discuss prose... WP:RPS explains what prose is, and it's a lot better at doing it than me, so I'm... not going to explain. Yes, having a template can still make something prose but having a table makes it not-prose. Cobra Kai (season 2) isn't a particularly good example for the subject matter, given it is a season article, not an episode article. Anyways, here's an example I picked out: Mother and Child Reunion (Degrassi: The Next Generation). It's an FA, and it the plot is split into two parts. No table. Just prose.
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Hello, I just wanted to introduce myself and let you know I am glad to be reviewing the article
Friendship Is Magic (My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic) in which you've been a major contributor, and has been nominated for
GA-status according to the
criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to
contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. | Remember, Imurmate ( talk) 22:45, 29 January 2022 (UTC) |
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Rate | Attribute | Review Comment |
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
None. | |
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
None. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
None. | |
2c. it contains no original research. |
None. | |
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. |
None. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
None. | |
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
None. | |
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
None. | |
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. |
None. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
None. | |
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. |
None. | |
7. Overall assessment. |
Well done, this article is ready to go for GA status. This article seems like it is almost compliant, although I would recommend to do the Plot section in table format ( like this article, however the Plot section is organized into 2 "Part"s so it seems like there is no need for it. |
[u]sing consistent formatting ... is not required(emphasis in original). Anyways, it is completely fine to use both the short and the long method, from my experience. Changing the citation style would violate WP:CITEVAR. I'd hate to bring up WP:OTHERSTUFF, but many featured articles, such as The Empire Strikes Back, use this without any problem. And re your comment about putting the plot summaries in tables, per MOS:TVPLOT, the summaries need to be prose. Pamzeis ( talk) 02:44, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
For main series articles, plot summaries ... should ideally be presented in a table using {{ Episode table}} and {{ Episode list}}.(emphasis mine) Unless I'm missing something important, this is not a main series article. OK, wait lemme calm down...So here's the relevant part:
Episode articles should have a prose plot summary of no more than 400 words.(emphasis in original) OK, now that we're (hopefully) on the same page with which part of MOS:TVPLOT we're talking about, let's discuss prose... WP:RPS explains what prose is, and it's a lot better at doing it than me, so I'm... not going to explain. Yes, having a template can still make something prose but having a table makes it not-prose. Cobra Kai (season 2) isn't a particularly good example for the subject matter, given it is a season article, not an episode article. Anyways, here's an example I picked out: Mother and Child Reunion (Degrassi: The Next Generation). It's an FA, and it the plot is split into two parts. No table. Just prose.