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Reviewer: Bruvtakesover ( talk · contribs) 23:07, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
I'll have to delay that since my computer is acting up.
The article needs a few pictures, other than the single cover. It isn't very stable since this article has had loads of vandalism over the past few months (I can see why). Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 21:05, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
"There have been multiple covers of the song, including on the television series Glee, and in concert by Justin Bieber and Katy Perry, separately" - take away the and after Glee. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 17:57, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
"The music video for the song caught a sudden surge of hits after Michael J. Nelson, a comedian with a Twitter following, called it "the worst video ever made"." - You link other social networking sites, but not Twitter? Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
"In late 2010, a client of Los Angeles record label Ark Music Factory told thirteen-year-old classmate Black, who is from Anaheim Hills, California, about the company.[8][9]" - I think that needs reworded. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Cut down on the use of the likes and dislikes of the video. It isn't as important as other things in the article. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
""Friday" debuted on the Billboard Social 50 chart at number 9 on April 2, 2011[51][52] "Friday" debuted on the Billboard Hot Digital Tracks/Songs chart at number 57" - What? Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
""Friday" debuted on the Billboard Social 50 chart at number 9 on April 2, 2011[51][52] "Friday" debuted on the Billboard Hot Digital Tracks/Songs chart at number 57[53] on April 2, 2011 and peaked to number 38." - Reword to 'and went on to peak at number 38'. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Ref 57 is dead. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
We need a source for when and where the video was taken in the Music Video section. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Everything looks ok now – passing! :) Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 13:50, 29 January 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Bruvtakesover ( talk · contribs) 23:07, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
I'll have to delay that since my computer is acting up.
The article needs a few pictures, other than the single cover. It isn't very stable since this article has had loads of vandalism over the past few months (I can see why). Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 21:05, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
"There have been multiple covers of the song, including on the television series Glee, and in concert by Justin Bieber and Katy Perry, separately" - take away the and after Glee. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 17:57, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
"The music video for the song caught a sudden surge of hits after Michael J. Nelson, a comedian with a Twitter following, called it "the worst video ever made"." - You link other social networking sites, but not Twitter? Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
"In late 2010, a client of Los Angeles record label Ark Music Factory told thirteen-year-old classmate Black, who is from Anaheim Hills, California, about the company.[8][9]" - I think that needs reworded. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Cut down on the use of the likes and dislikes of the video. It isn't as important as other things in the article. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
""Friday" debuted on the Billboard Social 50 chart at number 9 on April 2, 2011[51][52] "Friday" debuted on the Billboard Hot Digital Tracks/Songs chart at number 57" - What? Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
""Friday" debuted on the Billboard Social 50 chart at number 9 on April 2, 2011[51][52] "Friday" debuted on the Billboard Hot Digital Tracks/Songs chart at number 57[53] on April 2, 2011 and peaked to number 38." - Reword to 'and went on to peak at number 38'. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Ref 57 is dead. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
We need a source for when and where the video was taken in the Music Video section. Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 22:29, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
Everything looks ok now – passing! :) Bruvtakesover ( T| C) 13:50, 29 January 2012 (UTC)