The ships were refitted and then transferred to Alexandria, Egypt Pipe Egypt to the Kingdom of Egypt.
French West Africa is overlinked.
eight 20-millimeter (0.8 in) Oerlikon guns were also added You mean cannons?
French Algeria is over linked.
on 17 October to rendezvous with the battleship Richelieu at the Azores and escorted Add Portugal after the Azores.
Link Corsica.
Ordered on 20 June 1931 as part of the 1930 Naval Program --> "Ordered and laid down on 20 June 1931 as part of the 1930 Naval Program"? Because the infobox says it was also laid down at the same time.
My mistake, the infobox was wrong.
on 28 August where she was decommissioned on 1 September and was used Maybe add a year after 1 September because the infobox says "1 September 1953".
Typo.
Images
In the image File:Le_contretorpilleur_le_Terrible.jpg I can see a British post-war.
Replaced
Source
Rohwer's book has a little typo in its title. It should be "Chronology of the War at Sea 1939–1945: The Naval History of World War II" instead of "Chronology of the War at Sea 1939–1945: The Naval History of World War Two".
My copy uses "Two"
WP:GBOOKS says we should link via an URL link in the books "French Battleships 1922–1956", "French Cruisers, 1922−1956" and "French Destroyers: Torpilleurs d'Escadre & Contre-Torpilleurs 1922–1956".
There's a bot running around and adding GBook links. I'll let it take care of that.
Infobox
"Reclassified: As a light cruiser, 28 September 1943" I think you forgot to add this information in the body? It also hasn't a citation which is a little bit OR.
I did forget.
"74,000 PS (54,000 kW; 73,000 shp)" The same as above.
Propulsion part is also forgotten in the body.
Both of these are in the 1st para of the Design and description section
Maybe also add the number of crewmen at peacetime into the infobox?
Nah, they can read the article if they want to find out.
Thanks for the review. It reminded me that I need to be more careful with these before I nominate them and will provide me with a useful checklist of things to look for before I do.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
00:03, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply
The ships were refitted and then transferred to Alexandria, Egypt Pipe Egypt to the Kingdom of Egypt.
French West Africa is overlinked.
eight 20-millimeter (0.8 in) Oerlikon guns were also added You mean cannons?
French Algeria is over linked.
on 17 October to rendezvous with the battleship Richelieu at the Azores and escorted Add Portugal after the Azores.
Link Corsica.
Ordered on 20 June 1931 as part of the 1930 Naval Program --> "Ordered and laid down on 20 June 1931 as part of the 1930 Naval Program"? Because the infobox says it was also laid down at the same time.
My mistake, the infobox was wrong.
on 28 August where she was decommissioned on 1 September and was used Maybe add a year after 1 September because the infobox says "1 September 1953".
Typo.
Images
In the image File:Le_contretorpilleur_le_Terrible.jpg I can see a British post-war.
Replaced
Source
Rohwer's book has a little typo in its title. It should be "Chronology of the War at Sea 1939–1945: The Naval History of World War II" instead of "Chronology of the War at Sea 1939–1945: The Naval History of World War Two".
My copy uses "Two"
WP:GBOOKS says we should link via an URL link in the books "French Battleships 1922–1956", "French Cruisers, 1922−1956" and "French Destroyers: Torpilleurs d'Escadre & Contre-Torpilleurs 1922–1956".
There's a bot running around and adding GBook links. I'll let it take care of that.
Infobox
"Reclassified: As a light cruiser, 28 September 1943" I think you forgot to add this information in the body? It also hasn't a citation which is a little bit OR.
I did forget.
"74,000 PS (54,000 kW; 73,000 shp)" The same as above.
Propulsion part is also forgotten in the body.
Both of these are in the 1st para of the Design and description section
Maybe also add the number of crewmen at peacetime into the infobox?
Nah, they can read the article if they want to find out.
Thanks for the review. It reminded me that I need to be more careful with these before I nominate them and will provide me with a useful checklist of things to look for before I do.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
00:03, 4 September 2019 (UTC)reply