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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 22:48, 22 September 2019 (UTC) reply

Some minor things:

Lead

• link lead ship
• perhaps pipe the link to the class to "her class" rather than just "class"
• link French West Africa
• explicitly state she was captured and transferred to the Free French
  • But that's just it, she wasn't.
    • Yes, I misread that, must have been thinking of a different ship... Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 03:25, 25 September 2019 (UTC) reply

Body

• "aft superstructure remodeled in early to create"? missing year?
• you could add the ordered date to the infobox
• link L'Indomptable and L'Audacieux
• "Central Atlantic during 7–13 November"
• link convoy
• "They departed Toulon on 9 September"
• rm comma from "were removed, on 21 January 1943"
• "return fire thant wounded"
• "Le Fantasque firinged 280 shells"
  • Been thinking about this and I don't think that it's incorrect. It's just like the sentence about her crew increasing during wartime.

That's the lot. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 03:50, 23 September 2019 (UTC) reply

See what you think.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:52, 24 September 2019 (UTC) reply

I tweaked a couple of things you missed. All good. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 03:25, 25 September 2019 (UTC) reply