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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 10:45, 12 June 2023 (UTC) reply

I will take a look at this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed ( talk) 10:45, 12 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Not much to this article, a reflection of her short service career no doubt.

  • The kW conversion for installed power is inconsistent between infobox and article body.
  • The lead says Brennus was a battleship but that isn't stated in the article body.
    • It's a short article, I don't think that it's necessary
  • The article body should also explicitly state that Framée gave her name to the class as stated in the lead.
  • I made one change to the text.
  • Sources look OK, a couple are quite dated but only used once each. Is there not a more modern source that discusses the sinking of the ship?
    • None them explain what the ships were doing when the collision occurred.
  • Image tags are OK.
  • No dupe links.

Thanks for your review; see if my changes are necessary-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:02, 23 June 2023 (UTC) That's it for me. Zawed ( talk) 08:26, 17 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Looks fine, passing as GA. Zawed ( talk) 10:00, 27 June 2023 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 10:45, 12 June 2023 (UTC) reply

I will take a look at this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed ( talk) 10:45, 12 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Not much to this article, a reflection of her short service career no doubt.

  • The kW conversion for installed power is inconsistent between infobox and article body.
  • The lead says Brennus was a battleship but that isn't stated in the article body.
    • It's a short article, I don't think that it's necessary
  • The article body should also explicitly state that Framée gave her name to the class as stated in the lead.
  • I made one change to the text.
  • Sources look OK, a couple are quite dated but only used once each. Is there not a more modern source that discusses the sinking of the ship?
    • None them explain what the ships were doing when the collision occurred.
  • Image tags are OK.
  • No dupe links.

Thanks for your review; see if my changes are necessary-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:02, 23 June 2023 (UTC) That's it for me. Zawed ( talk) 08:26, 17 June 2023 (UTC) reply

Looks fine, passing as GA. Zawed ( talk) 10:00, 27 June 2023 (UTC) reply

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