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Lead
the Mediterranean, Northern, and Reserve Squadrons— Anything to link to?
had been reduced to reserve.— Had again been reduced?
Design
3,000 long tons (3,000 t)— Inconsistent abbreviation, here and elsewhere in the section.
The French naval engineer Louis-Émile Bertin protested the beginning of construction of the new ship— Why? Was it clear such ships were out of date?
Characteristics
4,561 long tons (4,634 t)— Inconsistent abbreviation.
Her crew consisted of 486 officers and enlisted men— Any idea how many of each?
mounted in sponsoned— Is this correct? The "ed" in "sponsoned" looks odd.
that was 61 mm (2.4 in) in total— That was 61 mm (2.4 in) thick in total?
Later in her career, Sfax was modernized— When? Any more details? This seems like a somewhat short paragraph for what was likely a big overhaul.
Service history
Mediterranean Fleet ... Northern Squadron— Anything to link to?
along with the cruisers Sfax, Amiral Cécille, Milan, and Léger.— Sfax participated along with Sfax?
She was struck from the naval register in 1906— Any details on why?
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Reviewer: Usernameunique ( talk · contribs) 19:12, 28 April 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
Lead
the Mediterranean, Northern, and Reserve Squadrons— Anything to link to?
had been reduced to reserve.— Had again been reduced?
Design
3,000 long tons (3,000 t)— Inconsistent abbreviation, here and elsewhere in the section.
The French naval engineer Louis-Émile Bertin protested the beginning of construction of the new ship— Why? Was it clear such ships were out of date?
Characteristics
4,561 long tons (4,634 t)— Inconsistent abbreviation.
Her crew consisted of 486 officers and enlisted men— Any idea how many of each?
mounted in sponsoned— Is this correct? The "ed" in "sponsoned" looks odd.
that was 61 mm (2.4 in) in total— That was 61 mm (2.4 in) thick in total?
Later in her career, Sfax was modernized— When? Any more details? This seems like a somewhat short paragraph for what was likely a big overhaul.
Service history
Mediterranean Fleet ... Northern Squadron— Anything to link to?
along with the cruisers Sfax, Amiral Cécille, Milan, and Léger.— Sfax participated along with Sfax?
She was struck from the naval register in 1906— Any details on why?
References
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