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Reviewer: Djmaschek ( talk · contribs) 00:10, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
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Pass. Here is my review. Djmaschek ( talk) 04:00, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
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The following sentence in the introduction was grammatically correct, but I found it hard to follow because of the distance between "The ship" and the last clause. You don't have to fix it, but please consider...
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Pass. Here is my review. Djmaschek ( talk) 04:00, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
I already edited the following.
The following sentence in the introduction was grammatically correct, but I found it hard to follow because of the distance between "The ship" and the last clause. You don't have to fix it, but please consider...