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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 18:17, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
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Some tweaking is needed particularly in the copy. I would advise you to read the general suggestion below and look at your other pages, including other GANs, to fix it. There is a dodgy reference I'd excise and at least one additional ref needed to validate a claim.
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18:41, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
General suggestion, since I see English is not your first language, based on what I've reviewed: focus your writing improvement on articles like "the" and "an" that you sometimes lack where they are needed. Presumably they are less used in Polish? I know this can be an issue for English speakers learning Spanish, so I empathize. This issue takes up a lot of bullet points. There also has been a lot of time since the nomination so consider anything you see fit.}}
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Infsai: You need to locate a new source for Afterwards, the performers are in plastic packaging, with the visual concluding with Tyga being tied up by his company.
before this nomination can be passed.
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17:09, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
I'm particularly concerned about ref 25 (Meaww). The site appears to be of rather low quality and is marked by User:Headbomb/unreliable as generally unreliable. Yet it is cited six times. Is there a replacement? I don't think I'd be comfortable passing this article without a new ref here.
“Juicy” featuring Tyga. The success of the latter song led to Doja’s first Hot 100 chart entryPartial verification, but I will need another ref, probably a chart, for the #41 showing in February 2020.
Tyga told Lowe, “She’s a true artist. And I think we see that from her outfits, her Lives, her TikToks, but that’s what makes her her and she’s a real true artist and that’s what I appreciate about her.
consists of a very catchy melody, but overall the instrumental remains rather calm.
"Freaky Deaky" is even sexier than "Juicy".
the accompanying music video is almost reminiscent of a sex tape, complete with leather outfits and whips
No other textual issues with sourcing.
Cover art has an NFUR. Two CC-licensed images are used. Encouragement: Add alt text, mostly to describe the appearance of the cover art. An image of Tyga may also be desirable.
![]() | Freaky Deaky (song) has been listed as one of the
Music good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: August 28, 2023. ( Reviewed version). |
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content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 18:17, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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Some tweaking is needed particularly in the copy. I would advise you to read the general suggestion below and look at your other pages, including other GANs, to fix it. There is a dodgy reference I'd excise and at least one additional ref needed to validate a claim.
Sammi Brie (she/her •
t •
c)
18:41, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
General suggestion, since I see English is not your first language, based on what I've reviewed: focus your writing improvement on articles like "the" and "an" that you sometimes lack where they are needed. Presumably they are less used in Polish? I know this can be an issue for English speakers learning Spanish, so I empathize. This issue takes up a lot of bullet points. There also has been a lot of time since the nomination so consider anything you see fit.}}
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Infsai: You need to locate a new source for Afterwards, the performers are in plastic packaging, with the visual concluding with Tyga being tied up by his company.
before this nomination can be passed.
Sammi Brie (she/her •
t •
c)
17:09, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
I'm particularly concerned about ref 25 (Meaww). The site appears to be of rather low quality and is marked by User:Headbomb/unreliable as generally unreliable. Yet it is cited six times. Is there a replacement? I don't think I'd be comfortable passing this article without a new ref here.
“Juicy” featuring Tyga. The success of the latter song led to Doja’s first Hot 100 chart entryPartial verification, but I will need another ref, probably a chart, for the #41 showing in February 2020.
Tyga told Lowe, “She’s a true artist. And I think we see that from her outfits, her Lives, her TikToks, but that’s what makes her her and she’s a real true artist and that’s what I appreciate about her.
consists of a very catchy melody, but overall the instrumental remains rather calm.
"Freaky Deaky" is even sexier than "Juicy".
the accompanying music video is almost reminiscent of a sex tape, complete with leather outfits and whips
No other textual issues with sourcing.
Cover art has an NFUR. Two CC-licensed images are used. Encouragement: Add alt text, mostly to describe the appearance of the cover art. An image of Tyga may also be desirable.