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Under the section "Complaints, opposition and repression", appears an incomplete sentence:
He issued an order that George Baxter, the widely respected puritan rector of Little Wenlock, who had fled the area.[65]
Please complete. The omission may have been a simple error of writing rather than vandalism. Cloptonson ( talk) 20:39, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
The section "Royalist seizure of Shrewsbury" begins: Ottley was already active in local politics before the outbreak of the English Civil War in 1642..
For an otherwise quite detailed article, this reads somewhat vaguely. It would help if there were demonstration of his local political activity - magistracy, membership of municipal council, seat in parliament? Cloptonson ( talk) 20:46, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
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Under the section "Complaints, opposition and repression", appears an incomplete sentence:
He issued an order that George Baxter, the widely respected puritan rector of Little Wenlock, who had fled the area.[65]
Please complete. The omission may have been a simple error of writing rather than vandalism. Cloptonson ( talk) 20:39, 11 September 2015 (UTC)
The section "Royalist seizure of Shrewsbury" begins: Ottley was already active in local politics before the outbreak of the English Civil War in 1642..
For an otherwise quite detailed article, this reads somewhat vaguely. It would help if there were demonstration of his local political activity - magistracy, membership of municipal council, seat in parliament? Cloptonson ( talk) 20:46, 11 September 2015 (UTC)