His religion in the infobox should be cited from a source in the body.
A citation has been added to the sentence in the article that essentially says that Marbury was of the Anglican church, but had decidedly Puritan views.
The sentence "Though he was born and raised in London, his family maintained close ties with Lincolnshire, where his older brother, Edward, was knighted in 1603, and died in 1605 as the High Sheriff of Lincoln." should probably be split into two sentences, one about the family's ties with Lincolnshire, and one about Edward.
link is already to correct article; which Elizabeth should not be redundant in context of article
"St Saviour, Southwark" → "Southwark Cathedral"
link goes to correct article; it is not necessary to use the exact name of the article; I'm using another acceptable name instead (the name given in my source)
Works and legacy
Looks good
Family
A semicolon, not a comma, should be used to separate multiple items in parentheses. [eg "(baptised 11 September 1598, buried 9 April 1601)" → "(baptised 11 September 1598; buried 9 April 1601)"]
I never knew this; I've adjusted the punctuation accordingly
References
"{{reflist|3}} → {{reflist|30em}}
I did this, but don't know why. It's changed the format from three columns to two, but to my eye the original three columns looks better
I suggested it because all the citations are
Harvard-style, so don't take up much room on the reflist. This way, readers with smaller monitors won't see the references squashed into three small columns.
The following was added to the
Anne Hutchinson article, but I removed it, and thought it would be more suitable in this article. I will post it here first, as I'd like to check it out before including it in the article:
-- one of Marbury's formal students at Alford was John Smith, later to achieve fame through his work at Jamestown Colony in Virginia [1] --
^Peter Firstbrook, A Man Most Drivem: Captain John Smith, Pocahontas, and the Founding of America ((London: 2014) at 117-19
His religion in the infobox should be cited from a source in the body.
A citation has been added to the sentence in the article that essentially says that Marbury was of the Anglican church, but had decidedly Puritan views.
The sentence "Though he was born and raised in London, his family maintained close ties with Lincolnshire, where his older brother, Edward, was knighted in 1603, and died in 1605 as the High Sheriff of Lincoln." should probably be split into two sentences, one about the family's ties with Lincolnshire, and one about Edward.
link is already to correct article; which Elizabeth should not be redundant in context of article
"St Saviour, Southwark" → "Southwark Cathedral"
link goes to correct article; it is not necessary to use the exact name of the article; I'm using another acceptable name instead (the name given in my source)
Works and legacy
Looks good
Family
A semicolon, not a comma, should be used to separate multiple items in parentheses. [eg "(baptised 11 September 1598, buried 9 April 1601)" → "(baptised 11 September 1598; buried 9 April 1601)"]
I never knew this; I've adjusted the punctuation accordingly
References
"{{reflist|3}} → {{reflist|30em}}
I did this, but don't know why. It's changed the format from three columns to two, but to my eye the original three columns looks better
I suggested it because all the citations are
Harvard-style, so don't take up much room on the reflist. This way, readers with smaller monitors won't see the references squashed into three small columns.
The following was added to the
Anne Hutchinson article, but I removed it, and thought it would be more suitable in this article. I will post it here first, as I'd like to check it out before including it in the article:
-- one of Marbury's formal students at Alford was John Smith, later to achieve fame through his work at Jamestown Colony in Virginia [1] --
^Peter Firstbrook, A Man Most Drivem: Captain John Smith, Pocahontas, and the Founding of America ((London: 2014) at 117-19