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Holy crap is this article badly written. It is an embarrassment. I implore someone with background into the topic to write a more lucid account. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.246.87.166 ( talk) 17:01, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
Can I please second this comment? From the first few sentences, it's clear that this is written by someone whose first language isn't English, or who has gleaned the information from elsewhere and has assembled it hastily. It doesn't rise to the writing level necessary for this kind of philosophical topic. I apologize that I don't have time to do it now, but this one needs a WikiAlert! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 209.140.207.173 ( talk) 15:40, 15 February 2016 (UTC)
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Holy crap is this article badly written. It is an embarrassment. I implore someone with background into the topic to write a more lucid account. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.246.87.166 ( talk) 17:01, 9 December 2015 (UTC)
Can I please second this comment? From the first few sentences, it's clear that this is written by someone whose first language isn't English, or who has gleaned the information from elsewhere and has assembled it hastily. It doesn't rise to the writing level necessary for this kind of philosophical topic. I apologize that I don't have time to do it now, but this one needs a WikiAlert! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 209.140.207.173 ( talk) 15:40, 15 February 2016 (UTC)