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This is a great article. There are a few sections that could be expanded on for clarity. It would be very beneficial to expand on the concepts of the last sentence of the history section ("While laws in Jordan ... constitute 'honor crimes"). Especially since there are more than one law that allow for this. Its also worth detailing the whys of Jordian women not being involved in the workplace, as that infinitely affects how the aid is received and the counters they are facing. Overall this article leaves researchers, like me :), with healthy curiosity!
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Foreign aid for gender equality in Jordan received a peer review by Wikipedia editors, which is now archived. It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article. |
This is a great article. There are a few sections that could be expanded on for clarity. It would be very beneficial to expand on the concepts of the last sentence of the history section ("While laws in Jordan ... constitute 'honor crimes"). Especially since there are more than one law that allow for this. Its also worth detailing the whys of Jordian women not being involved in the workplace, as that infinitely affects how the aid is received and the counters they are facing. Overall this article leaves researchers, like me :), with healthy curiosity!