recorded by American R&B singer Beyoncé Knowles for her second studio album re-released, B'Day Deluxe Edition --> recorded by American R&B singer Beyoncé Knowles for the re-release of her second studio album, B'Day Deluxe Edition. Done
wikilink B'day
"Flaws and All" is similar to earlier records by Knowles, most of which compared it to that of Dangerously in Love --> doesnt make sense
wikilink classic and ballad
in which he sees through all of her flaws and loves her unconditionally --> who sees through all of her flaws and loves her unconditionally
Knowles for the B'Day Anthology Video Album ---> Knowles for the B'Day Anthology Video Album Done
italicize other instances of "B'Day", this is poor work.
Although the song was originally released during the re-release deluxe edition of B'Day, the song was included on many other releases. --> huh? Done-Try re-reading, cause that was fine.
Theuhohreo (
talk)
14:21, 13 March 2011 (UTC)reply
"Flaws and All" garnered very positive reviews by critics, most of which complemented the ballad as a highlight of the album -->
WP:OR, you cant generalize likie this Done
'Flaws and All,' --> wrong, it should be 'Flaws and All', Done
recorded by American R&B singer Beyoncé Knowles for her second studio album re-released, B'Day Deluxe Edition --> recorded by American R&B singer Beyoncé Knowles for the re-release of her second studio album, B'Day Deluxe Edition. Done
wikilink B'day
"Flaws and All" is similar to earlier records by Knowles, most of which compared it to that of Dangerously in Love --> doesnt make sense
wikilink classic and ballad
in which he sees through all of her flaws and loves her unconditionally --> who sees through all of her flaws and loves her unconditionally
Knowles for the B'Day Anthology Video Album ---> Knowles for the B'Day Anthology Video Album Done
italicize other instances of "B'Day", this is poor work.
Although the song was originally released during the re-release deluxe edition of B'Day, the song was included on many other releases. --> huh? Done-Try re-reading, cause that was fine.
Theuhohreo (
talk)
14:21, 13 March 2011 (UTC)reply
"Flaws and All" garnered very positive reviews by critics, most of which complemented the ballad as a highlight of the album -->
WP:OR, you cant generalize likie this Done
'Flaws and All,' --> wrong, it should be 'Flaws and All', Done